|Reviews for The Desert|
| B9K6A chapter 1 . 9/3
| KimmiePie79 chapter 4 . 1/13/2015
I really enjoyed the story keep it up.
| Dk97 chapter 3 . 12/30/2014
Your doing a great job bring the story along! As for your grammar, no offense but it's bad. You need to use commas and put periods in the appropriate places. That's really the only issues I can see. Keep it up!
| Iron7King chapter 3 . 1/1/2015
Your grammar is improving but your punctuation marks are still out there a little. Oh and I LOVE The Grey Wolves Series and your fan fiction here is wonderful.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/14/2014
I think you are doing fine and the story sounds great so far keep at it