is anyone from equestria comein got find her?
is she going back to equestria at all ever?

Double space have you heard of it

Great story.

I should point out that html doesn't work on that well.

Also, you need to double space between paragraphs, because tabs also don't work here.

Twilight with Angra's authorities is something that my mind repulsed on principle. Although, her referring to almost all of them as last resorts was a funny bit. Was the name and effect of endless curses purposely similar to the one by MGS, or is that authority of the Zoroastrian evil deity part of Campione! canon?

Good work

Interesting story. you should check out the story of the writer- Zed019 Story name. - Harry-Stu Gamer.

Sounds like a story you would enjoy to read. Give it a chance and read at least to chapter 5.

cool story.. If you carry on with it please don't put the champions together... at all