Reviews for The Unrelenting Frozen Seas: The Journey |
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![]() ![]() It’s getting boring tbh |
![]() ![]() Did rose take Percy's place, or did poseidan also have a second child, as when Rhode asked poseidan he was nervous or such whether it was about Tyson or percy I don't know |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im gonna be honest. I don’t know if I’ve ever read a HP fic where Ron Weasley is both frequently present and also completely uninvolved with the plot. Like normally he’s either a companion character or an antagonistic prick, depending on if the author hates Ron or not. But having him in the story like he is here is honestly kinda refreshing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Changing the basilisk honestly makes no sense whatsoever. Basilisk in Harry Potter are different from the ones in Percy Jackson for a reason. The major point would be that they’re born way differently, which I feel like you should know already. Also why is she even in Hogwarts if you’re just gonna have her be a bitch to anyone who isn’t a demigod. It kinda makes the whole fic seem like you’re just bashing on anyone from Harry Potter, if you were just gonna bash the entire time you should just leave it out of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I definitely would've thought Dumbledore knows about the demigod scene of America, or atleast, the whereabouts of someone as legendary as Chiron. Demigods are canonically in HP after all, even if they're not pjo demigods. |
![]() ![]() ![]() what’s the book 2 called cause i’m looking at everything damn |
![]() ![]() ![]() what… |
![]() ![]() ![]() please please holy shit im begging here |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh shitttt OH SHITTT |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh shit if there’s a ship LET THEM TWO TOGETHER PLS |
![]() ![]() ![]() it's the wrong Gods dam one! must be the Hades one or I'm hallucinating |
![]() ![]() ![]() bagels are the superior baked good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nooooo. I didn't want her to accept |
![]() ![]() ![]() the lyrics are: Ahoy, Ahoy, Sweet Daughter of the seas Ahoy this child be mine The admiral's girl, his whole entire world... For as long, as stars do shine Ahoy, Ahoy, sweet daughter of the seas Ahoy this child be mine The Lady's Girl, her whole entire world... For as long, as sands of time Be strong, Belong, My Daughter of the Seas Be brave, Don't you forget your seaside days Always the pride of our nation's eyes You will never go astray But the [The Lady's Girl,] can be removed or changed an the [her] after it could be changed to [His] I'm sure it could be made her theam song. sorry I posted 2 reviews but I don't think I could edit the first one to add this part that I forgot to add to it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think it would be nice if Poseidon sang Daughter of the Sea Lullaby by Sharm to Rhode. I can just see it now him singing it to her on x-mas and her just crying an hugging him by the end of it. |