Reviews for The Unrelenting Frozen Seas: The Journey
Guest chapter 4 . 12/23/2023
It’s getting boring tbh
Guest chapter 12 . 10/3/2023
Did rose take Percy's place, or did poseidan also have a second child, as when Rhode asked poseidan he was nervous or such whether it was about Tyson or percy I don't know
kyurega chapter 12 . 8/26/2023
Im gonna be honest. I don’t know if I’ve ever read a HP fic where Ron Weasley is both frequently present and also completely uninvolved with the plot. Like normally he’s either a companion character or an antagonistic prick, depending on if the author hates Ron or not. But having him in the story like he is here is honestly kinda refreshing.
Silverwingzz chapter 12 . 5/5/2023
Changing the basilisk honestly makes no sense whatsoever. Basilisk in Harry Potter are different from the ones in Percy Jackson for a reason. The major point would be that they’re born way differently, which I feel like you should know already. Also why is she even in Hogwarts if you’re just gonna have her be a bitch to anyone who isn’t a demigod. It kinda makes the whole fic seem like you’re just bashing on anyone from Harry Potter, if you were just gonna bash the entire time you should just leave it out of the story.
Cadmus8 chapter 6 . 3/18/2023
I definitely would've thought Dumbledore knows about the demigod scene of America, or atleast, the whereabouts of someone as legendary as Chiron. Demigods are canonically in HP after all, even if they're not pjo demigods.
Chaiiiii chapter 18 . 1/18/2023
what’s the book 2 called cause i’m looking at everything damn
Chaiiiii chapter 17 . 1/18/2023
Chaiiiii chapter 16 . 1/18/2023
please please holy shit im begging here
Chaiiiii chapter 16 . 1/18/2023
oh shitttt OH SHITTT
Chaiiiii chapter 11 . 1/18/2023
oh shit if there’s a ship LET THEM TWO TOGETHER PLS
MJ Spontaneous chapter 17 . 11/11/2022
it's the wrong Gods dam one! must be the Hades one or I'm hallucinating
cassnova5424 chapter 5 . 8/29/2022
bagels are the superior baked good.
d.mckinney1014 chapter 4 . 6/25/2022
nooooo. I didn't want her to accept
Guardian-Wolf-227 chapter 1 . 5/11/2022
the lyrics are:
Ahoy, Ahoy, Sweet Daughter of the seas
Ahoy this child be mine
The admiral's girl, his whole entire world...
For as long, as stars do shine
Ahoy, Ahoy, sweet daughter of the seas
Ahoy this child be mine
The Lady's Girl, her whole entire world...
For as long, as sands of time
Be strong, Belong, My Daughter of the Seas
Be brave, Don't you forget your seaside days
Always the pride of our nation's eyes
You will never go astray
But the [The Lady's Girl,] can be removed or changed an the [her] after it could be changed to [His]
I'm sure it could be made her theam song.
sorry I posted 2 reviews but I don't think I could edit the first one to add this part that I forgot to add to it.
Guardian-Wolf-227 chapter 11 . 5/11/2022
I think it would be nice if Poseidon sang Daughter of the Sea Lullaby by Sharm to Rhode. I can just see it now him singing it to her on x-mas and her just crying an hugging him by the end of it.
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