Reviews for Undomiel
funkless chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
But less is MORE. This is brilliant piece- it is almost as if she was talking to Undomiel.
It really also made me think about Undomiel and her choice- did she regret it? Did she regret him?
Nenya Kanadka chapter 1 . 7/16/2003
Oh! Sweet. And awfully sad, but "therein lies its main beauty". Gorgeous. . . .
DarkThoughts chapter 1 . 1/20/2003
wow...i can't express everything about this poem in words. let me just tell you that i cried when i read this, and the ending is very unique. i'm adding you to my fav author's list! keep writing!
Darkflare who cannot be bothered to log in chapter 1 . 12/6/2002
This is amazing! It...just is!
Psycho Goddess chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
*sniffles* Lovely poem
Sunsong chapter 1 . 11/24/2002
I wish I'd gotten around to reading this before.
jessica chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
my GOSH!...i cried at the end...the end had feeling, beautiful glorious feeling!
Celeblas chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
This is really good, though it doesn 't say anywhere about the desendant of Arwen and Aragorn perhaps you could make a sequel to this I'm sue it woulds be very good.

shirebound chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
This is beautiful. (I especially love the line, "had hope never entered your heart" - I assume that's a subtle way to say "Estel".) Just as poignant a poem as Arwen's final days must surely have been!