what a shit

What I can never wrap my head around is always why this mod soul acts very reluctant to give back something that is not his.

You are a good writer. The style, the rythme is impeccable. But... Hundreds of thousands of words, yet not a single, one, proper, fight. Seriously we're in bleach this is getting ridiculous. He's lived around Kenpachi for years yet not a single true fight to crunch on, same goes for Aizen. Solving the second most important Bleach villain in this fashion was almost jail worthy.

fucking touchy feely. the only other group that likes this chapter was the the record, i'm not insecure about my masculinity or anything like that. what i mean was, it's shounen. not shounen ai manga genre.

also,fucking watch the filler show. how the hell is ichigo not remember muramasa if you're even going to include the non canon?

i agree with the other comments said, too extra for the story own good. not including the wrong angle to go about non canon materials

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it's only been a single chapter and this is undoubtably one of the most retarded fictions i've read in a while, you utterly fail at creating believable characters with real motivations, behaviors or depth, it's like you kidnapped every character in your fanfic, you wrote not a story but a ransom note.

you made an isekai oc and renamed them ichigo with the personality of a submissive japanese slavery slave, not worth the read.

What the fuck is this garbage? where is the ichigo that broke into SS, HM, hell and fought tooth and nail? where is the ichigo that beat post-magical rock aizen? where is the ichigo that beat the shit out of most of the Lts infront of their damn captains in the invasion? where is the ich- Not here, clearly. Never before have I seen a more pathetic ichigo, this story disgusts me and checking your other stories you'll probably be making a slash pairing. Waste of my damn time.

(Sorry for my English, is not my native language.)
Hi ! ️
Wow. I really like your plot between the Soul King, Urahara and Ichigo. It's an interpretation that I haven't seen written until now and I think it's very fair and well brought. It's a shame not to see this last chapter, honestly. (After writing all this story ! 41 chapters !*clap clap*) If you are still with us, would it be possible to know what this last chapter has in store for us in a short summary ?

(I am also outraged by the hateful comments that were posted. It's unacceptable, and I hope that's not what made you stop writing. Opinions should ALWAYS be constructive).

Thanks again for sharing this great story with us !

Gran historia

Disfruto mucho de la historia, espero algún día el siguiente capítulo

damn yuzu ruined his dramatic exit.

Buena historia

This is awesome!

What a cruel place to leave this story. I hope you will continue because now I am dying to read more.