Disfruto mucho de la historia, espero algún día el siguiente capítulo

damn yuzu ruined his dramatic exit.

Buena historia

This is awesome!

What a cruel place to leave this story. I hope you will continue because now I am dying to read more.

I laughed so hard when I read the line where Isshin contemplated Ichigo’s future as a Yakuza Boss… it was perfect and I loved it.

This was unnecessary drama and your pathetic attempt to make some plot but you took it from a totally wrong angle. You were portraying your MC as capable of handling Aizen with ease by now but the first time Aizen shows up, your MC is shitting his pants. Just... sigh. The Aizen is manhandling your MC as if he was just a misbehaving child, literally. Look. I don't mind that the MC is at disadvantage. What I hate is how you portrayed Aizen's subtle power plays with Ichigo and Ichigo letting it go. That's what ruined it for me.

3 this story! Very exciting!

don't really see why ichigo is letting his mom treat him like a 9 year old. Honestly wouldn't mind if he snapped and said something like "Maybe I should have let you died if your going to keep getting in my way"

Why did you stop one chapter from the end?!

stupid fucking story not worth the read at all author can't write characters to actually seem like characters but instead like robots who do his bidding its stupid don't read if you value a good story because this isn't one of them it childish and rushes the plot so much it hurts there is no in between no developments that actually matter and aren't just thrown in by the author in the heat of the moment then totally ignored the next complete disapointment

god do i love it when authors cant get a character down at all tatsuki dies which btw fuck you you stupid ignorant fuck for that because he wouldnt have let that happen period and then you literally have him walk it off he would be pissed you stupid fucking pos i hate authors like you who have no idea how to fucking make characters either act like themselves or like a real fucking human being not a fucking bullshit robot who only cares for 5 seconds and then completely ignores it god damn you are one ignorant fuck author

A minor red flag in this chapter, on top of the other stuff with Urahara.

yeah now I remember why I dropped this. far to "extra" for my liking. fuck this shit.

What is this weird "Urahara works with Aizen" bit? That's not canon. And you've just jumped right into it with zero buildup or explanation. Is there a prelude to this story somewhere?