Wonderful chapter. Great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Whhhhaaaaat

There are some missing words in two spots:

1) The conversation between Ichigo, Urahara and Yoruichi.
2) After Ichigo goes into Bankai.

Its just a , followed by 'Ichigo/Zangetsu'

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ok just a little more to say and that is GO FUCK YOURSELF YOU DUMB FUCK DO YOU EVEN KNOW HOW ICHIGO ACTS LIKE FUCK YOU NEED TO GET IT RIGHT YOU FUCKING DUMB SHIT CUNT

ok no I fucking hate how you have Ichigo go around shopping and shit like
oke and being intimidated by the girls you fuck it's not funny it's annoying with fought in ears and faced things more scary then that like come on his like 20 years fucking old it's down right stupid does no one else feel like this because of you don't something's wrong with you if you think any man age 20 let alone Ichigo himself would do this shit then go fuck youselves and read the manga or watch the anime again

this is actually pretty good. i hope you finish it

please update soon especially if you only have one more chapter

Holy Sh*t don’t stop there! I was so entranced by your story and then there wasn’t any chapters left. I hope you continue to write more.

I'm confused here. Is this Urahara bashing or was this like a fan theory at some point. I kind of expected this to follow the canon timeline before the time travel.

Great story! Can’t wait to read what happens next!

its anticlimatic that everyone fights except OP ichigo that could kill everyone, and the only fight i remember from him is vs zangetsu mind controlled. he fights more to himself than everyone else. he didnt fight aizen at all.

Update soon

Good story. I thought Unohana was the antagonist because she is so menacing!

It's like it turn into a crack story. Why did you rush it like this? Wanted to finish it off maybe? That's okay I guess