Reviews for Chain
Tyllendal chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Oh...I like this! The rhythm is beautiful, the poem flows...It's beautiful!
torpedo chapter 1 . 2/7/2003
...chain?

~blink blink~

hey...does Ryou wear a chain on his Ring?

~bounces off to check~

~pops back in~

Really cool, though.

Kinda confusing, but it's probably -meant- to be ambiguous, so... ~shrugs~

~bounces back out~
Tsu chapter 1 . 12/10/2002
... You're my favourite short story writer...

It's so poignant and wistful, and the regret he feels at the end just -bites-. I hope you never stop writing introspective Ryou/Bakura relationship fics.
rayemars chapter 1 . 11/23/2002
So I started out by reading this, frowning, and reading it a couple times. Then I caught the title, and realized what was happening. I said "Good poem," nodded my head, and then clicked on something else.

But later I found it creeping into my mind at random points in the day. And taking into consideration that Bakura is working with his Yami, it really makes a point. I just...I really like this. But I like all your work.

Basically, you have once again written something with twice as much in between the lines. Brava!
Weird chapter 1 . 11/22/2002
I'd love to know what this poem's real intention was besides being about Bakura. While I have my own theories, I find the author's intent is sometimes most intriguing in comparison with my own views.

Either way you wish, I absolutly love this poem.