|Reviews for The Cake is a Lie|
| mystlady chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
Welcome back sailor ronin usa chan
This was refreshing to read and your writing has matured over the years, although I have not read a lot of your work except for Give a Reason and A Sailor Senshi in Hyrule (which is still by far my favorite ever since it was posted in your previous website .com)
Overall the chapter was sweet and sad at the same time. It did alot of remind of Hack/Sign. I recently watched a few episodes of Sword Online with my hubby which he thinks a better anime and storyline which puts Hack/Sign to shame)
Good luck with the rest of your fanfic projects but real life sometimes gets in the way of things.
| Apollymi chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Okay, ouch, painful twist ending there. Beautiful and well written, but that was one seriously painful twist ending. Bravo!
| Yami Nocturna chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
Omg, this is horrifying. At first I though it was some weird Serenity marrying Endymion Crystal tokyo side effect, purificiation/brainwashing.
/would the boys have been in a war that never happened then?