Reviews for Unintentional Interception |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Absoluitly love each time i read this one xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Utter and complete smut" LOL. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do you mean that you sent a PM and now wish to rescind it? Sorry...can't take it back. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great stuff from Jose. I love that you used his point of view. He really is a deluded douche. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Telling a good story is your strength. However, and lords knows I hate to do this, you need to get yourself a beta to help with everything else...punctuation, spelling, sentence structure. Good stories written poorly really make it hard to stay tuned. Sorry to be a downer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Come on Christian tell her how you feel about her! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He needs to tell Ana how much he loves her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does Christianhave so many people who want to hurt his family? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did Gabriel switch cards with him to get to Ana! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well Jose just won’t learn , he just keeps digging his self deeper and deeper into his lies. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I believe Elliot needs a psychiatrist about his sex addiction! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I hope they didn’t forget birth control! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why is Elliot so sex minded and is that what makes him so stupid. Thinking with his dick! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I bet it’s the Russo’s trying to kidnap Ana |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please take care of yourself |