Reviews for Fire in the Blood
niphrandiel chapter 19 . 1/13/2015
Bravo!
mhustler chapter 19 . 1/7/2015
Epilogue: Then Daryl changed his mind, they had babies and lived happy for all time. Lol. What a wonderful story. You are such a wonderful and engaging writer. It is so damn easy to get lost in your stories. Like I said in another review, I would have reviewed on every chapter but I just couldn't stop to write, I needed to keep going. I will continue to read anything of yours I have not yet read, I will re-read this someday. House Call, Orange Sky, Cigarette Daydreams, and anything and everything you decide to write. You are so very talented. Thank you for such wonderful stories.
mhustler chapter 17 . 1/7/2015
Only one thing bugged me about this chapter and that was Glenn saying how Rick told him about Daryl and Beth getting out together.. even though Daryl told them about it in the train car (which Glenn was in) when he spoke about her getting taken by a car with a white cross on it. Great chapter though. Finally Beth is on top! LOL.
mhustler chapter 15 . 1/7/2015
Ugh.. finally leaving a review. I haven't left one yet because I didn't even want to stop reading but now I just need to get it out... 4 more chapters... please tell me Beth and Daryl just ditch them. F everyone and F Maggie and Glenn... Beth and Daryl against the world, all I need. LOL.
ignatz chapter 19 . 1/7/2015
I've been thinking for a while on why it meant so much to me for Beth to have more of a story, not just with Daryl, but her OWN story. I've been a Walking Dead fan since day one and have always known that people die, they die unexpectedly and it's never fair.

But the thing with Beth, it was done so deliberately and, I hate saying it, but manipulatively and viciously. I think that's why I feel almost betrayed by the show. They did give her moments, they did show her growing, but the Grady Hospital story was so lame, and there never was a sense of urgency.

I never felt worried for her there or thought that Dawn, et al, were more than cartoon characters of what a "villain" should feel like. Even Shumpert was more intimidating than Gorman, ever.

The whole thing - from "Inmates," on - feels so contrived now, with one goal in mind: kill her. Her death feels so inevitable, unlike any of the others on the show. Ever.

Not sure what will happen in the back half of S5 that could possibly mitigate that feeling - whether through flashbacks or whatever. I suspect there will be nothing. Which is what makes me feel as if show is just shoveling shit onto Daryl to keep the storyline going for a character who they can never, ever kill off - despite saying that no one is safe.

Oh well, this is a long-winded prelude to saying: I love your story, I love that you've shown the complexities of Beth - she went through shit, but she IS a survivor - without turning into a caricature Warrior princess. It's just ... right. So, thank you.

Also, I'm almost tempted to watch the other shows you write for, so I can enjoy those fics as well.
ignatz chapter 15 . 1/7/2015
That, that was the best last line ever. I LOVE that your D/B are able to joke around with each other like that, even with the "love you" business still floating in the background, and despite the awkwardness of a couple's first time (which, thank you for being realistic about), and everything.

I don't know if it's obvious from the amount of reviews, but I'm (quickly) plowing through everything you've written, like a little kid gorging on candy.
jjeess00 chapter 14 . 1/5/2015
I find myself really pissed at Daryl. He says he cares for Beth but not out of love... I mean come on, Dixon! Of course you love her! :/
jjeess00 chapter 11 . 1/5/2015
ya know, everything is going so well and the woods have been so quiet... I wonder if somethin will happen soon? Hmmm? XD
jjeess00 chapter 8 . 1/5/2015
Wait I'm confused… What did she just tell Daryl? And was she also saying she had sex with Zach? Cuz I don't picture that… I'm really confused on what just happened XD
jjeess00 chapter 7 . 1/5/2015
YAY! That was so cute! :D
jjeess00 chapter 6 . 1/5/2015
Ooooooo! No one says shit about Daryl's girl!
jjeess00 chapter 5 . 1/5/2015
Wait Daryl does Meth? I thought that was just Merle? Daryl doesn't seem to be the type to do drugs…Drinking and smoking for sure but… Not drugs?
jjeess00 chapter 4 . 1/5/2015
I loved it so much! And I think you write them very well. Even though, I think, we all want them to just be all romantic right away… They are a slow burn, just like you write them. But hopefully something will happen soon? :)
jjeess00 chapter 3 . 1/5/2015
I almost died when Daryl said that there wasn't anything between them. I know that he is probably just denying it or whatever, but still! :D
jjeess00 chapter 1 . 1/5/2015
I can't even tell you how cute this is! I love it :') If only this is what REALLY happened in TWD… Our poor Beth :'(
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