|Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus|
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/30
Harems, incest, and pedo ships automatically made this and others luke this shit show you call a story complete trash
| bibink729 chapter 29 . 10/16
| bibink729 chapter 26 . 10/10
| HyperA2019 chapter 13 . 9/23
Looking forward to Chapter 44.
| Guest chapter 14 . 9/12
So much bs added for no reason lmao
| sharkyawesomeness5 chapter 2 . 8/11
You made me tear up and I am not much if an emotional person, good job but really, I am in the car and I don’t want someone to look at me and see tears in my eyes
| Guest chapter 43 . 8/4
Can you please update this story i really like it and I wish to know the end of it so plzzzzzzz
| Mark Abban-DesBouvrie chapter 10 . 7/29
Traveled for 50 metres, that is such a short
| Shenlong007 chapter 3 . 7/22
So much promise gone to waste again one where Naruto hides his strength for absolutely no reason it makes absolutely no sense at all this story could have been among the best I've read but I'll just quit it here due to again idiotic reasons for holding back
| Kevin Isaac Azur chapter 1 . 7/18
Shinigami be talking to a new born baby like he talkin to an adult. The baby is not even a week old! How is he suppose to understand shit.
| Totality Of The Blest Darkness chapter 1 . 7/12
The Judges are fucking arses and pedos
| kokichi2002 chapter 11 . 6/23
you nerf yakumo like how kishimoto nerf everyone in Boruto.
her genjutsu was basically the same as domain expansion in jjk. A genjutsu that the illusions causes the brain to make anything that happens to the victim within the genjutsu physically real, allowing her to potentially kill their opponents with genjutsu.
| dragonofdragons123 chapter 15 . 5/8
You are all over the place first you have everyone neglect him treating him like shit then you have this elaborate seen withngod and death olny to let death get away with tampering with a prophecy becaus and I quote hes lazy no it is you who is to lazy to try to come up with a story that one minute the boy doesn't tust anyone to the next forgiving everyone
| Fingerdash chapter 3 . 5/2
Create a conflict for the story to resolve in the third chapter. Why then do we need the other forty chapters?
| Guest chapter 43 . 4/12
Imma need you to get back and finish this story asap bro if not I'll find you and fight you until you do