Harems, incest, and pedo ships automatically made this and others luke this shit show you call a story complete trash

fffg

bbbh

Looking forward to Chapter 44.

So much bs added for no reason lmao

You made me tear up and I am not much if an emotional person, good job but really, I am in the car and I don’t want someone to look at me and see tears in my eyes

Can you please update this story i really like it and I wish to know the end of it so plzzzzzzz

Traveled for 50 metres, that is such a short
Distance

So much promise gone to waste again one where Naruto hides his strength for absolutely no reason it makes absolutely no sense at all this story could have been among the best I've read but I'll just quit it here due to again idiotic reasons for holding back

Shinigami be talking to a new born baby like he talkin to an adult. The baby is not even a week old! How is he suppose to understand shit.

The Judges are fucking arses and pedos

you nerf yakumo like how kishimoto nerf everyone in Boruto.

her genjutsu was basically the same as domain expansion in jjk. A genjutsu that the illusions causes the brain to make anything that happens to the victim within the genjutsu physically real, allowing her to potentially kill their opponents with genjutsu.

You are all over the place first you have everyone neglect him treating him like shit then you have this elaborate seen withngod and death olny to let death get away with tampering with a prophecy becaus and I quote hes lazy no it is you who is to lazy to try to come up with a story that one minute the boy doesn't tust anyone to the next forgiving everyone

Create a conflict for the story to resolve in the third chapter. Why then do we need the other forty chapters?

Imma need you to get back and finish this story asap bro if not I'll find you and fight you until you do