Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's not a very good fanfic. The reason Naruto is "forgotten" is idiotic. The behaviour of his family is cringe. The powers the author gave Naruto are illogical, clichéd nonsense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic has me so lost & conflicted. Idk if I want Naruto to be an independently strong individual or building bonds & family. The way this fic started, I thought it'll be the first one, but it kept switching back & forth. At least it's definite that he's not gonna be a recluse. I felt it a bit anti-climactic when hiroku died so early cuz I thought he'd be the main antagonist second to Madara. Either way it was so cool. I await ur return! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, he's gonna obliterate him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Finally the most amazing arc is starting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't remember if there was a disclaimer warning about the harem in this fic. As much I'm liking the story, I'm getting frustrated & annoyed by harem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes! Finally they meet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh fuck, i don't like her. I hoped it'd to be narumi. I don't like that hiruko's creation! I'm not fond of harem either, the story was too interesting to interesting to drop it but I can't stand it anymore. Not with her. Fucking hell, call him 'nii-chan' & dream of wedding him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Unfortunately I couldn't post this comment on the last chp. So here it is, comment for chp 29:- What?! Is that some bio-human they engineered or was one of the sisters really got captured? Now for this chp:- Argh, I hate this frickin trope! This fic does this each & everytime I start loving the story, it does something stupid like this & makes me hate it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just know I'm gonna love this arc already. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel so conflicted. I'm happy he got a second life buy I was happy before when things were going good for the Uzumaki-Namikaze Family. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't like the foreshadowing in this chp. I'm starting to not like this upcoming arc either. Naruto's either gonna bdcome a missing nin, become erased from everyone's mind, started getting treated worse then before, get hated on or banished or the worse, controlled. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did he really summon a dragon?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was so cute & funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! It's only now I realized that wasn't Orochimaru's curse mark! Isn't Hiruko the one with mind controlling or puppet jutsu? It reminded me of Kakashi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fucking hell. No way! |