Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
majikss chapter 1 . 9/29
come back
djbootyllama chapter 16 . 9/22
this is a great story but would have been better if naruto just dropped the Namikaze and Uzumaki names an just changed his last name he honestly doesn't need their love or the kindness. also my understandings with the clans of naruto he willing left the compound as the eldest and heir he basically forfeited his spot as heir so it would most definitely make the story smoother and better if he just started a new family/clan instead of associating with the clan/family that neglected him amd treated him like scum even if he forgave them if i was honestly in his shoes i wouldn't want to even have the same last or middle name as them even if i personally forgave them i just wouldn't want to talk to them unless forced to like minato being hokage i would have to talk to him but beyond that all ties to said family would be cut
theowalker45 chapter 11 . 9/15
Why the fuck is there even a curse mark its was only made by orochimaru so he can be immortal this story is fucking shit and have some of the most random and dumbest shit in it delete your story and try again cause it fucking sucks
TuffTittyWampas chapter 43 . 9/15
Ignore the hate comments I think you did really well with writing this story, (It is yours after all I think some people forget that and need to remember if they have serious issues with a certain story they can write their own.) I hope that you come back and update soon this has been one of my favorites for a long time. It actually amazes me that years later I can still come back and reread and enjoy it. Hope all is well.
Freddielebron chapter 16 . 9/15
That was so unbelievably chunni
Freddielebron chapter 16 . 9/15
Half this fucking chapter is peoples thoughts. Have you ever heard of the word moderation?
Freddielebron chapter 15 . 9/15
Dude his match was already supposed to be last. Did you not reread your story before writing to keep it consistent?
Freddielebron chapter 15 . 9/15
I don’t think the shunshin has been used by naruto once so far
Freddielebron chapter 14 . 9/15
It’s like you took every fucking cliche and threw it into one single story
Freddielebron chapter 12 . 9/15
Have one of them be a bye. Jesus fucking Christ. A 3 man free for all in the 3rd round of the chunin exams? For fucks sake
Freddielebron chapter 11 . 9/14
You just couldn’t help yourself huh? The chance to do something new and you went with this? Jesus
Freddielebron chapter 10 . 9/14
You should’ve made them have to collect 3 scrolls to pass. That way only 8 teams would pass and make the finals a smaller size. Having 39 people (if no other teams get eliminated) show up to the finals for a preliminary battle would just be tedious asf
Freddielebron chapter 10 . 9/14
Ugh this aura crap smh
Freddielebron chapter 8 . 9/14
Should’ve made him act like unohana from bleach. Separate personalities vastly different from each other but the secondary personality only unlocks when engaged in combat
Freddielebron chapter 8 . 9/14
I feel like if you just made him a psychopath who lets his rage out in combat but otherwise is entirely dull to every other aspect of life, this would’ve made sense. Instead it’s “justified rage” nonsense. For a dude who’s pretty apathetic, you’re reaching pretty far and making it cringe
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