Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
thedankestyeet chapter 14 . 4/15
...okay so theres no point reading this story.. only on the 4th chapter and were already getting the whole 'oh hes stronger than he showed' while he impresses some girls in the bell test after sitting and doing nothing. You made an angsty character, with no feeling of positivity with any character interaction, at all. Now the blame is going to be switched to naruto because hes only 'hesitant' to connect with someone and not outright furious that theyre actually trying that on him, now, of all times. now that hes strong and content having created a relationship with a pointless dude no one has heard of or cares about. Which for no reason is used as narutos anchor to being a nice person. So what really is the point in reading the story?literally just watch a guy get shafted by his family, then pushed into getting close again while hes forced to feel guilty because hes only 'kinda' pushing them away. Truly awful. Theres nothing to enjoy...how can you expect a readers heart to feel good when you dont make anything good in your story? Moving on from this dumpster fire.. couldve been good too, if everyones personality wasnt as flaky as a 70 year old homeless man's scalp with psoriasis
thedankestyeet chapter 14 . 4/15
its so interesting how a story can be ruined because the only feeling thats created from the interactions of there characters are negative..I dont want to like anyone here because theyre not outwardly regretful for being trash and ignoring someone, not understanding why, still doing it anyway, and not apologizing/atoning ven though you want him to like you now?
thedankestyeet chapter 13 . 4/15
why are you trying to half include him? seriously making such a pointless character.. shittier than i found sasuke to be
thedankestyeet chapter 12 . 4/15
...he only had a cold and distant aura because of all of you.. yet youre using it a a reason for the childs fear and apprehension of even speaking to him? Seriously yrash parents fr
thedankestyeet chapter 11 . 4/15
building a relationship with your son is a necessity, a given. not something you 'owe' him. still not treating him like family, just trying to get him to do what they want. Even more disgusting
thedankestyeet chapter 11 . 4/15
is he never gonna act out? theres less and less point in reading this story if hes gonna acquies all of their wants.. even though they werent able to do the same. for a BABY
thedankestyeet chapter 10 . 4/15
...its only polite since theyre your family? the ignorance youre giving rhese parents is stunning.. hello pot, meet kettle
thedankestyeet chapter 10 . 4/15
Oh? the way your son looks at you hurts? Cry me a river lmao...not even showing his remorse for how naruto mustve felt for years because of his own parents
thedankestyeet chapter 9 . 4/15
lmao you made a story where showing emotion to your own family is pointless and a waste of time...when is the entertainment of the story going to show up? lol
thedankestyeet chapter 8 . 4/15
Sorry to say this, but no one enjoys or finds entertainment in a non existent brotherly bond as a driving force in a story. its boring, why would i ever care about that guy? hes not why im reading lmao
thedankestyeet chapter 7 . 4/15
...acting out is necessary if you get nothing that everyone else gets. what kind of disngusting personality are you trying to create? You think acting out is childish? What and forcing to miss out on everything in life isnt? Literally disgusting lol if you think acting out is just childish and not necessary when youre entire life is filled with narcissists like you
thedankestyeet chapter 6 . 4/15
IT DOESNT MATTER HOW GREAT A SHINOBI HE WILL BE IF THERES NO REWARD. if you make him anything other than spiteful and distant I will be disappointed in you as human being
thedankestyeet chapter 5 . 4/15
Is your showing of affection with even the gods your way of shafting the mc? for what? The more i read the more i believe this is to cope with sadistic tendencies and happily abuse someone for no reason while throwing it in their face the whole way through? Lmao its so WEIRD literally DO NOT get it
thedankestyeet chapter 4 . 4/15
Nice grooming job weirdo.. why do you smile when saying these things? proud that a child will never get to be a child? I hope this shikigami shinigami mfer will be forced to watch everyone around him that he cares about be happy while shikigami stays alone and watched them grow without him.. hilariously absurd
thedankestyeet chapter 4 . 4/15
always steeling your heart when terrible sh*t happens to you isnt a boon. You basically just ensured that he will never feel things properly, and have forever damaged an innocent child. Forever. A child. Lmao, there isnt even a proper insult for people so vile
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