|Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
| Mark Abban-DesBouvrie chapter 10 . 7/29/2023
Traveled for 50 metres, that is such a short
| Shenlong007 chapter 3 . 7/22/2023
So much promise gone to waste again one where Naruto hides his strength for absolutely no reason it makes absolutely no sense at all this story could have been among the best I've read but I'll just quit it here due to again idiotic reasons for holding back
| Kevin Isaac Azur chapter 1 . 7/18/2023
Shinigami be talking to a new born baby like he talkin to an adult. The baby is not even a week old! How is he suppose to understand shit.
| The Genesis Emperor Of Reality chapter 1 . 7/12/2023
The Judges are fucking arses and pedos
| kokichi2002 chapter 11 . 6/23/2023
you nerf yakumo like how kishimoto nerf everyone in Boruto.
her genjutsu was basically the same as domain expansion in jjk. A genjutsu that the illusions causes the brain to make anything that happens to the victim within the genjutsu physically real, allowing her to potentially kill their opponents with genjutsu.
| dragonofdragons123 chapter 15 . 5/8/2023
You are all over the place first you have everyone neglect him treating him like shit then you have this elaborate seen withngod and death olny to let death get away with tampering with a prophecy becaus and I quote hes lazy no it is you who is to lazy to try to come up with a story that one minute the boy doesn't tust anyone to the next forgiving everyone
| Fingerdash chapter 3 . 5/2/2023
Create a conflict for the story to resolve in the third chapter. Why then do we need the other forty chapters?
| Guest chapter 43 . 4/12/2023
Imma need you to get back and finish this story asap bro if not I'll find you and fight you until you do
| Marcii Winters chapter 7 . 2/13/2023
IS NARUTO OPENING UP?!
| Marcii Winters chapter 6 . 2/13/2023
THAT ENDING WAS SO FUNNY!
| Mugetsu1958 chapter 43 . 12/17/2022
Love the story hopefully you’ll return after 4 years and make an epic comeback
| The Genesis Emperor Of Reality chapter 22 . 12/2/2022
Minato didn’t create the flying thunder god. Tobirama did!
| majikss chapter 19 . 10/19/2022
you're making minato weak that's a shame
| majikss chapter 1 . 9/29/2022
| djbootyllama chapter 16 . 9/22/2022
this is a great story but would have been better if naruto just dropped the Namikaze and Uzumaki names an just changed his last name he honestly doesn't need their love or the kindness. also my understandings with the clans of naruto he willing left the compound as the eldest and heir he basically forfeited his spot as heir so it would most definitely make the story smoother and better if he just started a new family/clan instead of associating with the clan/family that neglected him amd treated him like scum even if he forgave them if i was honestly in his shoes i wouldn't want to even have the same last or middle name as them even if i personally forgave them i just wouldn't want to talk to them unless forced to like minato being hokage i would have to talk to him but beyond that all ties to said family would be cut