Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
Guest chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
Nice! I hope satsuki doesn't become a fangirl, that would tarnish her! It would be cool if Naruto did what Sasuke did in canon, but not to orichimaru, it would be Madara Instead! In hope it's a rollercoaster of angst, drama, action and adventure, hurts/comfort, family, horror, tragedy, romance! Thats a bit much :O
Guest chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
Even without the Kyuubi Naruto still has ten times more chakra than Kakashi. Because of his Uzumaki heritage.
BBWulf chapter 6 . 11/17/2014
Nice. Pretty interesting thus far.
The Smouldering of Fear chapter 6 . 11/17/2014
what a great story and chapter am really looking forward to the next update soon.
theRandomizer13 chapter 6 . 11/17/2014
Make the pairing Naruto and Narumi
Yaoifangirl102 chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
Cool cant wait to see what happens next
Umbra.Venator chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
Hmm rather good chapter, made me want more :)

Keep up the good work! :)
thor94 chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
interesting.
naruto will be a sort of lee/swordman mix? only sword and taijutsu?

But i ask what do you plan now. Like you said, naruto has no kyuubi or good stamina/chakra level and unlike haku, anko team have basic medic skill at best. No way naruto can recover from his wound in only a week like zabuza or his canon self.
Wytha chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
Awesome. I'm imagining Naruto signed the contract for Dragons ... although Crocs & Gators would also be cool. Can't wait for the next chapter.
TheAlphaMal chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
This is very good, a lot more different compared to the standard neglect fics you find on this site. Keep it up! :)
LordHero chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
Nice chapter, the fight was done well, was the change some kind of "soldier "mode and wave was introduced well.
You had notice his team wantig to help him and had him try to have Zabuza spare them if thing's went wrong and had a little scene at the end, which were good little things to include in the chapter.
Hope to read more.
UnsanMusho chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
Best ending EVER! XD
anarion87 chapter 6 . 11/16/2014
nice fight
pitbull4567 chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
good chapter
koko-yarou chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
let's go for harem...harem is the best...but don't make too many girls fall for him...or it'll be a "bi-sexual relationship" harem all over again, where naruto's girls will fuck each other...just make it 4 for max...yeah, femHaku, Satsuki, Yakumo and the last one that i don't know who. you already raise the flag for Satsuki and Yakumo, and now you can raise Haku flag, like maybe both her and Zabuza survived from this mission and Zabuza told her to with Naruto and co. instead continue her journey with him, and while she stay in Konoha she'll live with Naruto in his apartment and try to open up with him where the romance will start to bloom...or something like that (once again, just a suggestion) :D
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