Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
M.D. Hurricane chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
Only Naruto girls for the pairing?
Also can we suggest weapons? And maybe a few dragons if you don't have them all picked out that is.
xxTerror33xx chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
I love it I love this story. I love everything about it. I am so looking forward to so much more and I wish there was more to read I was so disappointed when I reached the end of it. I love the humor, the characters, and everything I cannot wait until the next chapter. Please make it a long one please so I can read a whole lot.
dadofmad007 chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
wow bro keep up ur gud work
NinjaFang1331 chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
Awesome job with the one on one swordsmen fight between Naruto and Zabuza!
buterflypuss chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
good chap
plums chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
Please don't turn Wave into a 3 or 4 chapter arc. I'm far more interested in Naruto leaving the village at this point, rather than him sticking around and being accused of not being loyal after they made his life a living hell.
rich chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
dude way to fast. i love naruto fics. where you power him up,but your doing it to fast. slow down explain the growth. yes shadow clones making trainning faster, but it has it's limits. you the author are cheaping your own story
guest101 chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
WHYYYYYY! Solo close and cut it RIGHT AT THE FIGHT...I was going to cry for it to continue it...just hope you update like SUPER QUICK and put the next chapter up. Can't wait like seriously also I like the change and also the incest in the story of mito and narumi loving naruto so yeah can't wait till you put them up...also thanks for putting a story like this...don't know others like this so I like it;) hope you continue it.!
Kit chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
I want zabuza to lose an arm and get destroyed in the fight like I mean manhandled Never had a chance
Guest chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
stay awesome and be legen wait for it and i hope ur not lactose in'tolorent because the word is dary ,legendary
Guest chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
supert history
EnglishKitsune chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
Can't wait XD
Guest chapter 4 . 11/12/2014
Really good chapters so far and would really like to see more. The only thing I can really say is if you could add english translation for all the jutsu's used in brackets as it is easier to see what jutsu are you talking about. Other than that the chapters so far are extremely great. Can't wait for the next chapter
John chapter 4 . 11/12/2014
the story is well written but I think the ideal that naruto would not give into his hate humans are animals to begin with his childhood would turn him into a monster monsters are made not born but made
ShadouRyu-kun chapter 5 . 11/14/2014
woooooow! it's damn good! man! You really know when to put the parts, hurt, action, regret... everything! I just hope you don't stop here, this is too damn good to be left here. please update!
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