Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
PoeticFire chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
You can't just leave things like that? The Buster Sword vs. The Head Cleaver, the ultimate broadsword showdown! Please, get the next chapter out soon!
Guest chapter 3 . 11/11/2014
That's incredibly stupid.
The Broken Aesop about hate is already such a dump, illogical, hypocritical, piece of bullshit in canon, what make you guys think you could make it better ? Just give up about it, no one want to hear about 'Naruto giving up his hatred' or whatever kind of idealistic crap.
The point of a Neglected story is precisely that the main character is neglected, and what come after that. Not... That.
At that point Naruto murdering people left to right would be smart and original in comparision.
ImpEmp chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
Yay! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Umbra.Venator chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
pretty cool story so far, keep it up! :)
ColdxCold chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
Naruto x satsuki pairing
Guest chapter 4 . 11/11/2014
Nice! Naruto leaves behind the facade he was wearing and is leaving his parents house and live on his own...AWESOME!;) CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Wytha chapter 4 . 11/11/2014
Nice chapter ... story so far. Interesting touch about Kabuto being the perpetrator of Orochimaru's crimes and bringing Hiroku into it. Although, could have simply had him run back to Sasori, still I'll be interested to see what role he plays in the future.

Looking forward to seeing what kind of apartment Naruto gets. I'm hoping it's a 2 bedroom spacious apartment with some amenities that shows he was doing something other than training as well to amass enough wealth to afford it. The second room can be left empty of used for something he doesn't want others to know about/see.
Kit chapter 4 . 11/11/2014
So will naruto have a harem or just one girl?
Cuz for harem I would like satsuki and mito and narumi and yakumo to be part if it maybe konan can be part of it too
I like your story plz continue updating
LordHero chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
Nice chapter, without the bias in canon Anko's was ANBU captain nice, if you do choose to develop Yakumo or Satsuki's crush you might want to take the time to develop it either in the main story or through omakes (team bonding, meeting in free time, mini-adventures), them having a crush on a guy is fine but any further and you'll need to give it depth, handsome stoic or not (unless they're fan girls) character development does this and makes the reader
(and possibly the writer) more invested in the
character, this still applies if you decide on another girl, incest, im not squrimish if its fanfiction (no yaoi for main character though, or NaruHina, not entirely sure why) hell i've read a few good ones incest fics and you have removed the family bond but I don't see why you'd use it here. Of course the most importantly thing is you is that you like your own story peoples taste are varied and satisfying one can annoy a dozen others the most important person is yourself though or you'll lose interest in your own story.
Thanks for the chapter! Its difficult to write so we appreciate you doing this.
Saigetsu22 chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
I like this story keep it up
dadofmad007 chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
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buterflypuss chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
good chap
thor94 chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
good chapter.
hope naruto show more than usual fighting skill not really related to chakra or fantasy power.
pitbull4567 chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
Great chapter as always can't wait for what you have plan for this story.
sweetangelblu35 chapter 5 . 11/13/2014
Love the story so far can't wait until the next chapter great fighting scene
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