Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
pitbull4567 chapter 2 . 11/8/2014
Good chapter
chivotenkai chapter 2 . 11/8/2014
interesting chapter
The thought of parents is curious.
They know they are wrong but do not feel able to fix it.
Will they be able to worsen even more?
Hope not.
Also, from what I see, it seems that may never resolve (I guess you will not be able to create links not?)
poor Ryuuhei
Please naruto don't have in the future the dragon virus T.T
pitbull4567 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 11/5/2014
Another author writing a neglect. You probably don't know anything a child neglect do you. Children that neglectef by their parents DO NOT GROW UP BEING NORMAL. They either grow to HATE everyone and become killers or they will not forgive or screw their siblings or parents. Which I bet you or anybody that write this trash probably would.
ferduran chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
Excellent ficc, please update the next chapter soon.
LordHero chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
So the curse wears of in time but lats long enough to stop the developing family bonds (if i'm reading the summary correctly) well Naruto's had some training and has learn't that he will have to look for "family". Hope to read more!
RikudoNaruto1 chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
Omega Drago chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
Nice chapter will naruto family notice him later on in the story or will they keep on forgetting him
Stratos263 chapter 2 . 11/7/2014
Next chapter please
jh831 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
good start.
since you are having a neglect fick, and you don't want him to give into the hate, don't have him fall into love either. have him have no love or hate, he doesn't hate anyone, but he doesn't love anyone. have him feel nothing he just exists.
looking forward to see what happens next.
Stratos263 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
Interesting start
anarion87 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
nice so far
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