Reviews for A Son Forgotten - Hiatus
Fredward1 chapter 12 . 9/15/2022
Have one of them be a bye. Jesus fucking Christ. A 3 man free for all in the 3rd round of the chunin exams? For fucks sake
Fredward1 chapter 11 . 9/14/2022
You just couldn’t help yourself huh? The chance to do something new and you went with this? Jesus
Fredward1 chapter 10 . 9/14/2022
You should’ve made them have to collect 3 scrolls to pass. That way only 8 teams would pass and make the finals a smaller size. Having 39 people (if no other teams get eliminated) show up to the finals for a preliminary battle would just be tedious asf
Fredward1 chapter 10 . 9/14/2022
Ugh this aura crap smh
Fredward1 chapter 8 . 9/14/2022
Should’ve made him act like unohana from bleach. Separate personalities vastly different from each other but the secondary personality only unlocks when engaged in combat
Fredward1 chapter 8 . 9/14/2022
I feel like if you just made him a psychopath who lets his rage out in combat but otherwise is entirely dull to every other aspect of life, this would’ve made sense. Instead it’s “justified rage” nonsense. For a dude who’s pretty apathetic, you’re reaching pretty far and making it cringe
Fredward1 chapter 7 . 9/14/2022
Dude this whole other persona thing is cringy as shit. You channeled your inner chunni for writing this didn’t you
Fredward1 chapter 6 . 9/14/2022
Wtf is this bullshit
Guest chapter 18 . 8/29/2022
Fuck you
Kuro.435 chapter 4 . 7/26/2022
Kuro.435 chapter 3 . 7/26/2022
Well this is the 1st time ever that one can’t hate the others rejectingignoring MC/Naruto which made me conflicted... must be author’s goal... damn you author for not allowing me to have clear feelings about fictional character’sXD
Kuro.435 chapter 2 . 7/26/2022
What a bummer... Menma should have been based of Menma from Naruto but with yellow hair...
Kuro.435 chapter 1 . 7/26/2022
Certainly an interesting intro, let’s
Dragunav chapter 13 . 7/12/2022
Everytime i read this, the Dragons instantly makes me want to stop. It's such a stupid summon/race to even have.
Primo The Omnipresent Operator chapter 5 . 7/8/2022
Why Are You Using Western Names? Naruto Is An Asian Manga/Animation
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