|Reviews for Rejuvenation|
| DonGonDirty chapter 1 . 10/5/2020
I loved it! Some parts made me sad, and some parts made me proud, but ultimately it made me teary eyed joyful! The fact that you kept in mind that Zelda, and Link as much as most want the ship is actually unrealistic... Furthermore the fact that link can't stay pretty, and perfect due to the wear, and tear of battle! It also shows once a hero doesn't always stays a hero... Sad, but true. I love The Mature and crude Link far more than Young Hero Link. Far more character, and personality! Lana I have always loved she comes off cute and bubbly in the games, but now more mature, attractive, and caring! Overall 9.5/10 Only if I could have spent hours delved into your story rather than 15mins!
| Ubv5cc5yvububbuni chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
This was the first story of yours I read, and HOO-BOY was it a doozy. In a good way, I promise ;)
It was lucky I stumbled across this in my thirsty youthfulness; young me made no strong determents for what she wanted in her porn, only that it be mildly sound of plot and character. I got that and so much more, and perhaps acquired a taste for more... classy indiscretions XD
Cheeky sequiturs aside, your writing is some of the best I've stumbled across in all my years of fanfiction reading. Your style is compact but absolutely LOADED with story and character. Not one word appears to be wasted to me. The word choices are concise but sprinkled with just enough interesting alternatives that it doesn't clutter the page, or the reader's understanding of the story.
I SUPPOSE the only real criticism I have for you is a few format errors throughout, but those are small potatoes to the absolute quality of everything else.
Older Link is phenomenal. I wish I'd considered such an idea first, but there's nothing stopping me from playing around with him in my own writing, beyond sensual liaisons. But the way you write and describe his character is as perfect as it gets, since you're the only author I've seen write him as such so far. And even then, I believe it'd be hard to top.
Keep up the good work, and may you someday acquire the reads/followers you absolutely deserve.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2017
Link reminds me of Aquaman from the beginning of "Throne of Atlantis".
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
Very nice short story, and also less fairy-tale-esque than the main series often was portrayed as.
I'm normally one for long, complex stories that don't focus on but also don't shy away from the sex scenes. But this short one is one of my favorites too.
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2016
More of this calibur story-telling with Link having this persona is needed!
| Aristobulus500 chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
Really enjoyed this. Really nice to see Lana built up like that, with that kind of depth and emotion, and not just be a pure smut story...and yet not shying away from sex either. This was a short story, yet really rich and interesting, it's really a nice epilogue to HW and unexpected too considering it's, you know, a niche zelda game and all.
Lana is underappreciated so seeing her portrayed like this is nice.
| Dansama92 chapter 1 . 11/28/2014
I thought thus was really well done. Will there be more?
| Book of untold stories chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
Nice story link as a drunk older man was genius
| sdphantom10 chapter 1 . 11/6/2014
I cant escape the image of older link look like Sean Bean for some reason...
Great little story, age is definitely an issue most people tend to avoid but has a lot of potential which is proven here. I really need to play this game man...