I loved how you wrote the sage's reaction to ninjutsu and shinobi as a whole. "Have I not done enough?"

and best of all "Was his mother right?".

What a wonderful thought.

Are you still writing this story cause if not I’d love to continue where you’ve left off

I hate when super promising fanfics end so soon

Holy shit I LOVE this story. The writing is neat, the character is cool, I also very much love that the fanfic doesn't follow the same storyline like other books where Naruto's overly OP and has a harem. Based on the way Naruto/Hagoromo talks about his wife, I'm guessing the author is hinting that Tsuki might come back (which I really hope so). I wanna know more about her, I want to see her life with Hagoromo, how her character died etc. If the author does bring her back, I hope it's when they're teenagers . Although ik this work is basically abandoned, I'm still wishing for it to update

When is the next update please

666th review

This is superb, sensational, spectacular. I dearly wish this story gets continued. Hyvnn, wherever you are, please don’t abandon this masterpiece.

Neji has brown hair, not black

What an incredible story. Your penmanship is phenomenal, and your storytelling is compelling. I can’t tell you how hard it is to find a good story that centers around a spiritual motif like this one.

I know that writing takes precious time out of your day, time that you could be using for other, possibly more important, things, and so I can not ask you to continue to do so. Even so, should you decide to never touch this story again, let it be known that I’m glad you have created this.

Thank you.

the Uchiha doesn't have rikudou sennin documents, only that stone

His second coming cometh.

Ōnoki of Both Scales opened his eyes..

.. and he was assaulted by back pain.

loved this story , hope you will come back and update it

Is this ever going to get updated or...?

yeah! NEJI HAS APPEARED!

too bad it's not the real neji, but I'll take whatever I can get!

THANKS AUTHOR-SAMA!

Damn, all your stories are amazing, and you just seem to abandon them. What happened to having an ending planned, along with a sequel? Why'd you just throw this amazing story away?