Meh, I was still reading but I agree the last chapters were…

Let’s just say I wholeheartedly support rewriting from chapter 17 on at least.

Anyway, thank you for taking the time to write anything at all, and sharing with us!

Jesus, this Harry is a fucking pussy. Just kill draco already.

Sorry to say this but this Harry is turning into a whining little b*tch. “Oh no, I killed death eaters, boohoo”

Also, is Hermione going to be the next dark lady? She’s sure going that way.

I definitely hope he’s torturing malfoy for a few hours before killing him.

Man, this Harry is a prude.. “let’s not forget how old these bodies are” said no time traveller, ever. It’s just a kiss, not a full blown orgy. Man man man.

I wanted to say. It is a Remeber-all, written Rememberall, and not a remebrall. i loove your story though

PS- The story was good but could have been written better.

With the way harry and Hermione relationship developed in this, their 'fight' seemed forced. At this point, they should understand each other too much to make such simple mistakes and fight over it.
Please continue.

NO NO NO HARRY! FUCK HERMIONE
SHE'S THE ONE WHO'S IN THE WRONG!

i love how you used homonculous (homunculus) as a spell. Such a small but cool detail

fuck you. dumbeldore is a bitch.

i know and like all the remorse stuff but im honestly still pissed off at harry for not allowing hermione into his mind at all times anymore.

great Harry is still a pussy and a beta bitch and Dambelss good littel cock sucker and bend over bitch fuck this fic

I reread this. I had a longer review written, but I suppose the biggest thing that really really stood out was that Hermione hadn't planned anything all that well. They had a primary goal of the knots. A secondary goal of Voldemort. A tertiary goal of the Death Eaters. A fourth goal of training people up. A fifth goal of corruption in the ministry.

All of it was important. The death eaters were members of a known terrorist organization that was willing to kill and did kill. There were only two possible solutions for them. They died or they faced the justice system. Unfortunately the justice system was massively corrupt, partly due to them, so the only rational action was to remove them, though the order matters.

Logically, removing Lucius was likely a good idea in any event, to remove a source of funding, and well, he previously unleashed a monster that could have killed everyone in Hogwarts if it say got to the Great Hall at lunch. The others may have waited.

Logically the knots were, however more important than Lucius, and logically it is insane to try to do everything yourself. Since killing Lucius might affect cooperation with others, it was probably better to wait. Assuming they trusted Dumbledore to be a good man in version 1 of history, then logically talking with him early, and planning out the path to fix the knots would be priority one, with Voldemort priority 2.

Basically, this story doesn't make sense if you assume Hermione can still think logically at the beginning of it. Oh it was compelling reading and such, at least most of the way, but there are some serious issues. That being said, you've come this for. I'd recommend just finishing it and moving on. On one final note, your OC defense teacher could use some work.

This contingency plan seems awfully hard to believe.

Not because of the scope, the reasoning, or even the fact that it's kept to himself.

More so because I find it impossible to believe that Tom Riddle spent enough time wandering both the magical and muggle worlds by himself so he could secretly create these knots across the entirety of the United Kingdoms, all while also managing to fight a war.

This fic's world became so big my head hurts lol. Great story, but yea... it seems like you had big plans on this, but it spiralled out of control (?) idk, it really was ok at first, but there's too many plots that's going on lol. A lot of thing's happening and they're only like, 13.
I actually started just skimming the latest chapters, so I understand why dropped this.