|Reviews for Vahan|
| ak chapter 29 . 9/26
| Emma200525 chapter 9 . 6/10
did Dudley mean example?
| The Other Dude chapter 28 . 4/30
Good story, disturbing but readers are well warned by the Prologue Ch 1. I look forward with malicious anticipation to shock awe & bewilderment of He-Who-Must-Have-5-Names aka TwinkleShit.
| Feorgia On My Mi chapter 11 . 4/30
I appreciate the humor in this chapter (11) but I was tortured by a psycholigical sadist who knew I was vulnerable to severe blood sugar change issues. For anyone unaware or who does not take Hypoglycemia seriously, it can cause headache, tiredness, clumsiness, trouble talking, confusion, fast heart rate, sweating, shakiness, nervousness, hunger, loss of consciousness, seizures, or death. I notice also savage mood changes. It can affect diabetics and nondiabetics. Look it up.
If you have a family member or friend who suffers from this, help them avoid prolonged delays in getting meals or snacks. My family and I carry chocolate nut bars. Consult a doctor too.
| Guest chapter 28 . 2/24
Interesting than I usually read. I am impressed at how well you did making such a ruthless Harry so endearing as a character. Well done
| ImMoku chapter 3 . 1/21
Everyone would kill to have Big Brother like Dave..
rest in piece Dave may your next adventures filled with happiness..
| kaia chapter 8 . 1/15
| MrLunarBlack chapter 11 . 10/18/2022
I-wow 9 y/o Harry as dad is something I never thought of and I’m here for it. But then again Harry is mature so I suppose….
| ironhair chapter 1 . 9/11/2022
Reading. Ty for the trigger warning
| PartlyUnhinged chapter 1 . 8/25/2022
lmao its been awhile since ive been on this site and i saw the sequel and was like hey lemme go read the first one and apparently i finshed it and didn't remember so now im gonna read it again lets see how it goes
| SlytherinToNyx chapter 28 . 8/10/2022
so, this is my 3rd time reading this story and I loved it just as much as the first and second time. The new update. for the sequel is what prompted the re-read so happily jumping into the sequel again now!
| suziq968 chapter 28 . 8/10/2022
Just got a notification about an update on the sequel and read this over again to make sure I know what's going on. Fascinating as ever, you weave a scary, scary world. Going to the sequel now, thanks for writing!
| Cyber-Kanochi chapter 1 . 8/9/2022
Amén to that message
| firehawk213 chapter 22 . 7/13/2022
Seriously you fucking weirdo, not everyone wants to rape children. This shit better stop in the sequel.
And let's be clear, you're not being accused of being a pedophile because of the amount of child sex in this story, it's how you describe it. You cut through actions sequences without a care, but when talking about the bodies of little boys you go into painstaking detail of every pore in their body. THAT is what leads me to believe you are a pedophile.
| Darknessdawns chapter 29 . 4/5/2022
Well, this is by far one of the most interesting stories I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I'm absolutely thrilled it's a series. I also absolutely loved this book. It was fascinating to see Harry's dark beginnings on the street and how he grew throughout the piece. This was definitely one of my favorite versions of his character. I can't wait to see how is techniques evolve as he grows and learns magic. It would be awesome if he could incorporate it somehow into his fighting.
Also the detail you put into his empire as it grew from nothing was just breathtaking. Yes the prostitution was awful, but that's honestly expected and a sad reality of homeless life. Anyone who thought you supported it because it was in the story is a sheltered idiot. Especially since Harry's character was so against others being forced into it. Really the fact he would subject himself to such a horror to meet a goal just showcased his sociopathic tendencies.
Also you did such a brilliant job with his personality and really capturing how ruthless he is. The similarities between him and Tom Riddle we're staggering, but different. He really proved to be the Dark Lords equal and I can't wait to see how that all works out. Hell I'm just excited to get to see him go to Hogwarts. That's definitely going to be interesting. Unfortunately Dumbledore is going to be a serious problem especially with the mentioning of potions to control Harry. I just hope Snape can see past what he expects Harry to be.
Anyway I absolutely loved this story and can't wait to see where you take this series. So thank you for taking the time to write and share this. It was an amazing read.