Reviews for 12 Mystery
K Hanna Korossy chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Very cute! I especially loved the amazed army men, and a John who lets them play.
sylia91 chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Oh man, I am loving this series on short fics you have with the Winchester boys especially the weechester fics. Love them! Both Dean and Sam are adorable here and John distracted but loving. Perfect tone! More please!
missingmikey chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
Very cute!
Mendai Decovrii chapter 1 . 11/7/2014
What? A fic that actually represents John as a fairly decent father? I'm impressed. And actually pleased ;) It makes me happy to see them interacting as the family they more likely were (there's no way Dean would give John the admiration he does if John had really been a cruel man), even if my sadistic side enjoys the John-hate. Which is really beside the point...

THE POINT IS: This story was really cute. You captured the tone of the boys' respective ages quite well imo - it was easy to see that Dean was the more mature of the two, but was still quite young himself from the dialogue. I know, from my experience writing one weechester fic, that is tough to do. Cudos ;)