I really REALLY like this!
Hope you update soon!

2 months for 1,300 words and not much happened. The emotions are important but it can't be all there is. We need to see some tangible changes in Harry as a result of the symbiote, real things that will have an effect on the future course of this story.

awesome job

Looking forward to what happens next!

Very neat idea. Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

Soo a ton of this seems to be depressing and or almost horror like, so I would change the Adventure part of the story to Angst, or Horror as those themes seem more common than Adventure. False advertisement and all that is a wee bit annoying. Besides that the story is ok, hope you continue writing so at some point the story/stories can become good followed by great.

Well, pretty interesting so far. Not sure how the symbiote will change things long-term. It seems to lack the genetic knowledge of the Goa'uld even though they seem far more like the Tok'ra in temperament. Harry's body was changed to breathe water, but we haven't really seen anything to show other changes the symbiote might have brought about. Nor a change in his magic and it's usage. I'm hoping to see some pretty big changes to Harry soon that lead to huge deviations in the canon story line.

Wow, this premise is incredibly different and innovative. I'm quite curious to see how it develops.

This is gonna be great...
Is Harry going to meet the SGC?

I so love this fic. First found it on AO3 but since I don't have an account there I came to check if it was posted here too...lucky me! Thanks a million and keep up the good work! )

So how exactly are you going to get the symbiote to survive when its mature? Because right now Harry is acting as a host, like a Jaffa does. That means it isn't likeley for Harry to become a host in the way the Tok'ra or the Goa'uld are. And that mean that Harry can't keep hosting the symbiotes once they mature. He can go back to the cave and get a new symbiote, but then the mature one will die seeign as it has no host. So do you have a plan for that? Like are Harry's friends going to find out or be told and end up volunteering to be a host?

Just wondering, here...I like your story and i'd hate for it to end up running into a dead end because of something like that.
Anyway love the story, hope to read more.
Xoxo
Raven

that was wow i have no words for just how much this gave the shivers right along side Harry.

things are getting interesting and I wonder how the SGC will react to a earth born symbiote/Jaffa free of the Goa'uld god complex XD

sweet job

What about the fake horcrux? Will he encounter the SGC? Ever since i read Harry Potter's most excellent adventure by wolfd890 I've really liked this crossover. Hope you continue!