Reviews for Return of the Dragon Rider
Dovewing15 chapter 1 . 8/2/2019
Like how u started the chap
Emma.Henry.04.20.00 chapter 23 . 5/3/2019
A few chapters ago I said to myself, “if anything happens to Wrenlou I don’t know if I can keep reading. I will be so upset if wrenlou gets hurt,”
damzos chapter 10 . 3/27/2019
Depending on the time the story, is set Spain wouldn't of existed. It would have been either Granada or Castile. However you could of just called it the Iberian Peninsula, which is what that landmass is called (Portugal and Spain nowadays).
Willbear43 chapter 66 . 3/5/2019
I know I’m a little late to the story, but this has to be one of my favorite stories I have ever read on . I love the characters, especially Wrenlou. Thank you for creating this story because reading each part of it has been a bright part in the last couple of days I’ve been reading it.
RazorwhipsAndNightFuries chapter 40 . 2/10/2019
Would like to mention you forgot about Spineless.
Dragooon9 chapter 1 . 11/25/2018
good
HeatherHawkeye chapter 43 . 10/31/2018
... after all I read HE BETTER NOT BE DEAD
YllkaYin chapter 67 . 6/25/2018
I just had to come back here and reread this after seeing the light fury in HTTYD3 trailer. I'm also going to reread the adventures of Hiccup and wrendlou for old time sake
Guest chapter 10 . 6/13/2018
Aah wrenlow is like a second father to him
IAmHelenOfTroy chapter 43 . 5/19/2018
AHHHHHHH! I WAS TOO BUSY READING TO COMMENT BUT IF YOU KILL TOOTHLESSS, THE WRATH OF THE GODS WILL RAIN DOWN APON YOU!
LePetitPrince chapter 48 . 4/1/2018
I liked how the story started but I have to say as it progresses I'm getting disappointed. I feel like Hiccup comes across as incredibly whiny and grudgeful, in the way he keeps bringing things back to having been ignored or hurt in the past. It's like an easy way to make people shut up by guilt tripping them.
Chief Stoick and Astrid especially. And the whole emphasis he keeps putting on Wrenlou is so... Unnecessary. 'i couldnt count on you like I do on wrenlou' 'wrenlou will keep me safe' 'wrenlou wrenlou wrenlou'
I actually liked your OC but I don't like how Hiccup compares everyone to him.
And then Astrid... I have only seen the first movie. But I can't imagine her falling in love just like that. I ignored it for the sake of the other plot. But she's become this clingy tearful eager and submissive gf. So yh. Kinda sorry I can't push through the last 20 chapters.
Tauriel Skywalker chapter 66 . 4/1/2018
Oh my goodness, I'm not sure who the annoying little brother is here.

AH! Oh. My. Goodness! I loved this story! I love reading fanfiction to my sister and this is definitely going on the list. I can't wait to check out the sequel.

Thanks for the awesome ride!

God Bless,
Tauriel Skywalker
Tauriel Skywalker chapter 65 . 4/1/2018
Haha! Wrenlou is going to show those Vikings what real music is!

Twin! No wonder he took to a lost child his own age.

Wow, and Hiccup also looked a little like Josh, too.

Wait...the dude knew she liked him!? And never said anything about it!?
Tauriel Skywalker chapter 64 . 4/1/2018
AH! He's back!

Oh my goodness! I want to just break down sobbing right now! :D
Tauriel Skywalker chapter 63 . 4/1/2018
Okay, why is it taking Wren so long to get back?

Wow. I'm not sure who had the worse reaction to the separation but I'm putting my money on Hiccup since he ran instead of being told to go.
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