Man your OCs suck, your inented story is boring, and your comedy is lame. The good part is that this fic is abandoned

Boring

good

I don't know why people just put Naruto in these type of crossover as to just push him with no real effort to make a Little original.

Amazing chapter and like where it is going. Finally those two admitted their feelings for each other! That took forever and felt it was appropriate with how everything went. Her finding out about the Kyuubi would terrify anyone else if it would've been literally anyone else.

Pinkette is used to describe females ️

Please update soon

Is it the gem from bleach lol

Galuna Island not Garuda

Great story. Only thing i suggest is a wider range of vocabulary. The word "buxom" was used alot. There are lots of other words you could try. Keep up the good work!

your story is wonderful I hope you will continue it

Well, this was a very amusing chapter a female Natsu shivers just thinking about it, there was a lot of laughs lol, the ending was funny also, shame there's not been an update in 2 years love the story oh well.

Well, that was pretty cool always funny when there's body switches Mira finding out the truth about Naruto and the Kyubi was interesting, the enemies part was Ok I suppose, full of arrogant ahole's but what's new, the lemon was nice also NaruMira is a cute couple my second fav Naruto/Fairy Tail croosover pairing after NaruErza, I wonder what happens next will Naruto eventually return home or will he stay who knows, maybe he'll return home then after everything is settled return to Mira who knows.

Well, that was certainly different than canon but still cool, wonder what happens next should be interesting.

Well, this was pretty cool wonder how this arc will change with Naruto and Claire in it.