Reviews for For The Good Of The Village: Transitions Arc
Phoenixx Rising chapter 7 . 10/19/2016
If I were Naruto, I think I would probably want to just slaughter all those people. Sending me on a mission so I'll die with the promise of acceptance if I manage to stay alive. Screwed up people.
ChimamireNoBara22 chapter 7 . 3/10/2016
Waaaah! This fic is so intriguing and amazing :D Onto the final arc!
Lu Phantom chapter 7 . 9/15/2015
AWESOME
PLZ KEEP WRITING
jcampbellohten chapter 7 . 5/7/2015
Though I can see him wanting to know about his family (assuming he doesn't), Orochimaru's whole shtick is that he transfers his soul from one body to another because what he wants to accomplish can't be done in a single lifetime; he has no need to pass things on to any children. What's he really after, then?

The level of sugar in Naruto and Hinata's "A Walk to Remember"-style romance these last few chapters was sickeningly sweet, but nonetheless, since I expect a good ending to come out of this, I can still enjoy reading it. Looking forward to the rest of it! Oh, since Kakashi's going with Naruto, who's going to be Sakura and Sasuke's jounin sensei?
jcampbellohten chapter 5 . 5/6/2015
That's clever.
DayDreaming0f y0u chapter 7 . 4/4/2015
Dude, like whoa. I really hope Hinata does get cured and becomes a kickass kunoichi! Honestly, she doesn't deserve any of this. I'm loving the plot twists and details. You're doing a fantastic job! So much has happened, it makes my heart hurt.
Morbious20 chapter 7 . 3/22/2015
Great chapter it was very emotional.
Morbious20 chapter 6 . 3/22/2015
Great chapter
Morbious20 chapter 5 . 3/22/2015
Great chapter , well with Jiraiya, Itachi and Kakashi you'd have a hard time finding better trainers and teammates then that.
Morbious20 chapter 4 . 3/22/2015
Good chapter , considering the Hokage is in charge I would think Hiashi's comment regarding forced retirement could almost be considered treasonous.
Guest chapter 7 . 3/17/2015
Please update get what you Deserved pleasr. Give us chapter 51 or rewrite!
Carl The Human chapter 7 . 3/12/2015
I damn near cried as I read the scenes with Naruto and Hinata during this chapter, ESPECIALLY when he mentions the orphans. Gah, I was on a train while reading this and did all I could to not cry in public. I'm a sucker for cute romance and Goddamn it you hit me in the gut with the NaruHina fluff in this chapter and I loved every moment of it.
Can't wait for the next part of the series especially with the main stories going on with Naruto's mission, Hinata's recovery, Shikamaru's quest and Orochimaru's plans.
rexpro7 chapter 7 . 2/25/2015
It's over...
NOOOOOO!
When will it be back?
PugTheMagician chapter 7 . 2/25/2015
i'm surprised how well you came up with a scenario where hiashi would agree to helping orochimaru as he pointed out they have no need of her. i hadn't even considered the use of the same healing used on future generations but with a clan of that size the injuries are almost guaranteed. i also thought hinata's promise to waste away should naruto not return morbid but expected considering her level of infatuation so far shown. i also thought the way you had sakura disect sasuke's problems through obsessive note taking interesting, the only other time i have seen this track used before was having her easily beat sasuke in a spar before he had his sharingan because she knew EXACTLY how he fought, maybe you could use that too. i'm curious how this will all end, whether it will be a happy ending or a bitter sweet one considering the tone of the series so far
crazypaul00 chapter 7 . 2/25/2015
good chapter you updated there but please don't rush it its a good story
so hoping to read another good chapter from you
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