|Reviews for 168 Hours|
| Fancynancy63 chapter 8 . 3/24
Ohhhh I love this so much! I know that you probably have your own reasons for not continuing this. But I hope that you would consider starting it up again! It is so good!
| Little Dami chapter 8 . 3/15
im going to sound llike damian now but, I DEMAND AN END TO THIS STORY
| badgertablet chapter 8 . 3/4
as a fellow writer im lowkey five seconds away from fighting all of the ppl in the reviews bc GOD is it annoying and insulting and DEMEANING to have ppl just say stuff like “plz update” or whatever. like. pal. dude. brotato
shut your up. please
ANYWAYS ok sorry about that i get rly salty about how writers like u get treated. id fight them all if i could
getting 2 the real stuff: the protective batbros... they love each other... u can just tell that they do but like the best part is that u show it in like. a non-OOC way? when it comes down to it they’re all emotionally constipated as hell so big kudos to u for sticking w their canon-selves.
each individual torture is spine-chillingly creepy and horrifying in their own ways along with being deeply ironic (ie: damian insists that he’s the only ‘real’ son, but he sacrifices himself for his brothers. he insists that he’s not a ‘kid’ so from what im assumingwhich is bad touching bc that’s the kind of feel like that’s what your implying? dami would miss the captor being creepy in the first chap bc despite everything he’s still a kid and doesn’t think about/or recognize pervs like that, plus the torn clothing and his history of torture. it would Just Make Sense bc he’s suffered thru like all the tortures before and theyve never impacted him that much, plus the fact that damian /never/ cries bc of physical pain— only emotional and mental. plus the picture and damian telling tim it wasn’t worth it, which is a lot bc that implies that damian would rather choose death or a bullet than what he went thru, as well as the general sleaziness im getting from the bad guy. but i could be totally wrong! idk im simply theorizing) because it reverts him to a more child-like mindset or at least has his brothers treat him like a real kid. and jason’s irony is clear as he got shot, and he shoots people, and dick and tim’s torture—bc really the last chap was for both of them imo— is ironic bc tim is sacrificing himself for two people who tried to kill him in the past even tho he claims to dislike them both and the ‘numbness’ he gets emotionally and physically. dick’s is bc he’d do anything for his bros... but instead of him getting hurt which is what he assumed would happen he has to hurt tim to help them. what im trying 2 say is that it’s v clever ya dig? hope that makes sense
basically this story is gucci gucci gang and v good! i enjoy ur writing a whole ton and will def be pawing thru ur other stories like a raccoon in a trash (or in this case, gold bc that’s what they r) can. i hope ur life is going good and that its not super stressful (which, while i hope, i doubt is true. im around the same age as u and im dying, dude, so my heart goes out 2 u...) stay strong bro
uhhhhh yeah. if u don’t mind i was wondering if i could draw a scene from the fic? i totally understand if u would prefer i didn’t tho! and on a side note do u have any other social media i could follow? i like checking in to see how the artists and writers i follow r doing lmao . idk if u can respond to reviews personally or not so if u choose 2 respond hit up my dms ig? or go to my tumblr which is just the same name as i have on here
holy mother theresa on a hood of a mercedez benz this got long wHOOPS. in short hope ur doing well and thank u for blessing my eyes w ur writing
| Jeremie chapter 8 . 10/12/2019
| Miko Eiko chapter 8 . 9/3/2019
Rayos, amo esta historia, te agradecería si la continuaras
| ellastarsong chapter 8 . 4/20/2019
Is this going to be continued? Please say yes! It's a fantastic story, and the way you write for all the Bat boys is great!
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/30/2019
In really sad that this fanfic has died. It was really good
| InsaneRabbit chapter 3 . 3/27/2019
I'm rereading this and honestly this is the best torture fic ive ever read. srsly kudos to you for most disturbing imagination
| Ravis chapter 8 . 3/10/2019
I know its been a while but please just complete it! I wanna know then end! And what did they fo to damian?
| nikizap chapter 8 . 2/22/2019
Do you still exists? Are you still logged in? Because if you are for the love of all humanity please please update. Or at least let someone else take over and finish it. This story is too good to be left unfinished.
| Messitoe chapter 8 . 2/10/2019
5 years later... PLEASE UPDATE
| Rehabilitated Sith chapter 8 . 2/4/2019
...3 years later?
| Dark-angel0301 chapter 8 . 1/28/2019
Please update! This is soooo good!
| uniquemangalover chapter 1 . 1/13/2019
THIS IS GREAT!
| L19 chapter 8 . 1/13/2019
I know it has been years but plzzz update