Reviews for Resolution |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The Potters are decadent of The Peverells through Ignouts Peverell the youngest of three brother it is important because it relate to the story in a big way(the cloak) also James was only son and was the son of Flemont and Euphmia Potter |
![]() ![]() Twoja historia jest dużo bardziej racjonalna i psychologicznie prawdopodobna niż kanon. Harry po wychowaniu jakie otrzymał, byłby właśnie taki. Dzięki za Twoją pracę. Ta historia daje mi wiele przyjemności. Mam nadzieję,że pozostajesz w zdrowiu. Pozdrawiam. |
![]() ![]() I love Your story. Thank you very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* This was a good story and I enjoyed reading it, but there are definitely loose ends. I did go and check to see about the sequel, and there are nine chapters posted... But the most recent chapter was posted over four and a half years ago and the story isn't marked as complete. I'm going to resign myself to being disappointed about not finding out what happens because I try my best to not start and complete stories especially ones that haven't been updated in as long as that one has. I hope you continue to write and maybe one day you will finish the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I missed the part where Harry and lupine had whatever sort of falling out that they did... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would Harry ask about "a" spell the ward off the dementors, when he already knows the patronus spell will do so? And had already planned to learn it earlier in the story, but then just didn't. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just wanted to let you know in case you didn't, at least half the time the first letters of people's names aren't being capitalized in the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry had planned to try and learn the patronus charm, but he hasn't brought it up yet, hasn't seemed to be working on it either on his own. Is this like him going to see the healer, it's mentioned and just doesn't happen? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm a little confused. Why would Harry offer his hand to Flitwick, regardless of whether he accepts it or not, when it was Harry that was on the ground? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still enjoying this story. Wanted to point out that you mentioned Harry had an assignment from professor Binns, but didn't mention him ever going to the class. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's been several days since he got to the Alley, since he is already picked up the potion he ordered which would take 3 days. Yet, he's STILL hasn't seen a healer like he had originally planned to. Is he just not going to now? Also, is Charlus's portrait the only one he is going to talk to? I'm guessing there might be other portraits of his older family but he just hasn't talked to them and maybe he won't? Did his parents ever have any made? What about his grandmother or his aunts or uncle? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why would Theo even offer to show her Harry around when they're not going to be able to do it before school gets back in session? It seems dumb. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You said searching out family information was the last of his tasks, but while he did go to the apothecary to order a potion he never went to a Healer like he had planned to. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, cool! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. Interesting to see one where Harry stays away from Dumbledore, and avoids getting caught up in his plots. DD not trying to force Harry to stay with the Dursley's is different, maybe out of sight worked well? Nicely done. |