Reviews for Resolution
Accio Allsorts chapter 12 . 8/19/2020
I like this version of Ron. Instead of being mad, he's just like 'meh, whatever. Your problem, not mine.' It feels very like Ron.
gabzep chapter 39 . 8/9/2020
I really liked this story but I would have liked more.

I enjoyed his new friends and even tho I love bashing fics it was nice to see him just growing apart from Ron and Hermione without crazy drama behind it.
TwinTigerLover chapter 25 . 7/20/2020
chapter 25.

At the end of this chapter you have Harry make a mental note to ask Lupin for a way to ward off dementors but when they got off the train at the bigning of third year Harry and Lupin had a descussion on the Prontus charm and what it did.
Why would he ask lupin for a spell when he already has the answer. would harry not be better off or more likely to ask lupin or even flickwick (the charms professor who's helping him) more about learning how to cast it?
DragonHeart89 chapter 39 . 5/11/2020
That was a very abrupt ending
Jestersky98 chapter 38 . 3/31/2020
Is this medicore cry baby Harry or a Harry that tries to live up to his parents genius cause it sure as hell doesn't look like the 2nd one... Whatever you're trying to accomplish with this story is unfortunately not working out for you otherwise we wouldn't have to suffer through minimal interaction, maximum angst and maximum stupidity
Jestersky98 chapter 25 . 3/31/2020
From what you're trying to write Harry as you're not really having him asking or looking for key information and he seems to ignore a lot of shit he should ask about, very disappointed
old-crow chapter 40 . 2/29/2020
Hi,

You asked for feedback. I'll offer some. I greatly liked the story concept. A summer without interference is a clever idea.

For the most part, your characters worked. You marginalized Hermione and to a smaller extent Ron and Dumbledore without degrading them. Your Susan, Flitwick and Theo worked well, They are worth caring about.

In balance, your editing was noticeably lacking and I believe that more people would take your story seriously if you wrote 5-10K word chapters rather than 1,500 - 2,000 word ones. Your story would flow better as well.

Thanks for sharing your story.

Old-Crow
Ali chapter 40 . 1/21/2020
Thanks for writing and sharing this I really enjoyed reading it . I really liked the character you gave Harry , Theo , Nev and sue . They each came to life in their own way. There were also some nice original ideas and I really enjoyed the way Harry and Theo met. I look forward to the sequel.
ABeaupain chapter 39 . 12/10/2019
What a wonderful story. Thank you for sharing
yrfgd chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
I like the reference to Queen.
gnefariousgnorc chapter 39 . 9/4/2019
I found this through an aimless google search for fic and I'm so glad I did. Your worldbuilding is wonderful, your tone is measured and wonderfully smooth to read, and I flat out enjoy how you put words together. I spent the entire read with a smile on my face, and now I'm off to go check out the sequel.
Knights-and-Ravens chapter 4 . 8/23/2019
did you use Monopoly for places and street names?
wolf550e chapter 27 . 8/16/2019
duel, not dual, throughout.
Sitka.Larry chapter 40 . 7/6/2019
Loved this story, and look forward to reading 'Resurrection'.
Sitka.Larry chapter 27 . 7/6/2019
Thoroughly enjoying this story, but it is 'duel', not dual...
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