I really enjoyed this story.
I love the new friends, wish Harry hadn't been cold to his first friends, but I understand that friendships don't always last.

But everything else? Perfect

Great plot, but the excessive vocabulary is unnecessary and distracting. “Mildly chagrined”. “Answered sardonically. Replied succinctly”… Things like this pull you out of the story. There’s a reason a simple “said” is so popular and it’s because it disappears into the background, and lets you focus on the action rather than the words themselves.

Great story, thanks for sharing!

I did enjoy your story. Thank you.

Great read, one thing in this chapter, either Gryffindor lost points or the snitch ended up being worth 140 points instead of the regulation 150. Otherwise this fic is amazing so far.

Loved it. Not much dialog, but a wonderful story nonetheless.

Keep writing as life allows

You just had to go and make me cry.

I enjoyed reading this. You write well.

And thank you for your good spelling, punctuation, and grammar - much better than the average fanfiction!

I like it, thanks!

Thank you for writing and sharing this wonderful story!
I really like that Harry is far more level-headed and smart than in canon.
I think that if he had better friends like in this story he would have thrived more!
I will definitely go read the sequel now. 3

I like this version of Ron. Instead of being mad, he's just like 'meh, whatever. Your problem, not mine.' It feels very like Ron.

I really liked this story but I would have liked more.

I enjoyed his new friends and even tho I love bashing fics it was nice to see him just growing apart from Ron and Hermione without crazy drama behind it.

chapter 25.

At the end of this chapter you have Harry make a mental note to ask Lupin for a way to ward off dementors but when they got off the train at the bigning of third year Harry and Lupin had a descussion on the Prontus charm and what it did.
Why would he ask lupin for a spell when he already has the answer. would harry not be better off or more likely to ask lupin or even flickwick (the charms professor who's helping him) more about learning how to cast it?

That was a very abrupt ending

Is this medicore cry baby Harry or a Harry that tries to live up to his parents genius cause it sure as hell doesn't look like the 2nd one... Whatever you're trying to accomplish with this story is unfortunately not working out for you otherwise we wouldn't have to suffer through minimal interaction, maximum angst and maximum stupidity