|Reviews for Summer Jobs|
| pippy99999 chapter 6 . 4/17/2005
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2003
Your story is okay but no offence, this is based on my opion (can't spell) and I see that you really are a big Riku fan...but um...WHY ARE YOU PICKING ON SORA! That's just so mean and having his Keyblade taken from him. I know that you are a Riku fan, I mentioned it before, but must you pick on Sora? I know there rivals (and friends) in the game and that Sora got the Keyblade instead of him but was Sora that mean to Riku ever? And I don't get it...
Quote: “STOP BANGING, YOU LITTLE KEY BLADE MASTER BRAT!” Ansem yelled at Sora before opening the doors. - chapter 5.
Well techniquically is he the Keyblade Master again if the Keyblade was taken off him before in chapter 4?
Last thing I like to mention, could you leave the Riku-and-the-author scenes out at least a few, I mean one, you totally side with Riku not leaving a ounce of sympthy towards Sora, two, I really can't imagine the whole thing especially the paupo fruit thing. I mean he is RIKU! FROM KINGDOM HEARTS! It just seems so wrong from my point of view. You know you can be mean! How can you portray Sora as the *evil* one...
Quote: "Whoa, I really need to stop yelling thought Sora when he started to go hoarse.
With a yell, Sora took out his Key blade and got ready to attack Riku.
One lets think about a little logic here. Would Sora really get a Keyblade out to attack Riku over a SIMPLE TWENTY DOLLARS?
Quote:"POOF! Rikku24 appeared between Sora and Riku.
“LEAVE MY RIKU ALONE! YOU WANT 20 I’LL GIVE YOU 20. 20 SLAPS!” Rikku24 yelled. ‘NOW WATCH AND WITNESS THE POWERS OF A…KEYBOARD!” I *cough cough* I mean Rikku24 yelled."
I think Riku can stand up for himself. How could you slap Sora. You stand up for Riku like he can't take care of himself and whenever you do you always rely on your 'Keyboard'. WHY DON'T YOU LEAVE SORA ALONE!
Your proably wondering if I am a Sora fan. No Im not.
And not to mention this is kind of pointless but I'll give you credit for being able to contuine it though. Please don't take it offencesivly but I just could stand by and just watch you contuinally bash Sora! A character of Kingdom Hearts! I think I like Sora, RIku, Kairi just the same...I think so I don't think I have a main favourite.
That is all.
| Kitty got claws chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
Hey Rikku24 or would u perfer 'Victim of Boredom'
(i have really bad hand writing sorry...)When Riku was hyper and the words were put together i could still read them.-I liked that story you should make it longer...i'm bored so bored, bored bored bored bored"10 mins later" bored bored... and did i forget to tell u i'm bored?
| GothicVampirePrincess chapter 1 . 4/26/2003
Hey Steph it's me Tor
Hope u don't mind I put u in one of my stories! (my only story) GothicVampirePrincess
| Ryeka Isthar chapter 6 . 2/15/2003
What the-? Sephiroth's not a freak!
cool! ansem's cany shop is open again! yayay! *takes Malik bye the hand and runs to the candy shoppe owned bye Ansem*
Ryeka: yay! buy me lotsa candy Malik!
Malik: ok ok! i'll buy all the candy you like! just calm down!
Ryeka: *gasps in awe for about 5 minutes* .
all the candy I want? oh malik, I don't need that much candy as long as I have you, you Sweet Thang! *kisses Riku- oops! er. **blushes** I mean Malik*
yay! I can't wait to read s'more of Rikku24's work! keep it up, it's great, girl!
| Ryeka Ishtar chapter 5 . 2/15/2003
*eyebrows furrow into a drooped look, and Ryeka starts to look sad.*
Ryeka: Poor Ansem.
| Ryeka Ishtar chapter 4 . 2/15/2003
Bwahahah! You really have it out for Sora, don't you? *Sora pops into the scene and runs into Ryeka's arms*
Sora: Save me Ryeka!
Ryeka: Of course, Sora! I would never harm you! Now come into my room for a few moments so I can show you something! (and afterwards steal your green card! *since when do 14 year olds have credit cards?*) hahahaha!
Sora: *blink blink*
| Ryeka Ishtar chapter 3 . 2/15/2003
Hey! I learned a new word! Con-.? Err. What was it again.?
| Ryeka Ishtar chapter 2 . 2/15/2003
Gyahahahahaha! That was so totally the funniest story ever! The koolest, too! I loove this chapter! I couldn't stop laughing! I wanna hear what happens to Riku and Rikku24 though. Gr. I'm not gonna touch it with a 120 ft pole, but I'd still like to read that part of the story! Keep writin em, Rikku24!
| Ryeka Ishtar chapter 1 . 2/15/2003
This story was so kewl! Why do I think so? Because it's got Riku in it! Heeheeheehee! *starts to jump up and down in exitement* Riku is soo cute! *Malik appears and smacks some sense into Ryeka*
Ryeka: oof! Sorry Malik. I love you, too.
Malik: S'ok. I forgive you, Hunny Bunny. But calm down, ok?
Ryeka: OK! So, thanx for writing such a great story Rikku24! Well, I'll go read the rest of it now. Write more and more and more and more and.
Ryeka: gomen! I'll just say that I love your stories, Rikku24, and keep em comin! Cuz I'll keep readin em!
| a friend at school chapter 6 . 1/18/2003
I love your stories! They are always really funny! I hope that you keep writing! Never stop! And, finish summer vacations before you start yet another story! Please!
| Caterfree10 chapter 6 . 1/17/2003
Aww. Poor Sora and Sephiroth got sent to the insane asylum. BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT WAS PRICELESS! WHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Anyways, This was great and I can't wait 'til the review ceremony! See ya then!
Ja Ne! _
| Insanity Prelude chapter 6 . 1/13/2003
Aikaya: Well, looks like we're done reading.
Avida: Reviewer's Ceremony? Sounds cool.
Aikaya: Hey, you guys. I just noticed something.
Avida, Epsilon, and DC: What?
Aikaya: Haze is missing.
Avida, Epsilon, and DC: Oh.
Yami Haze: OK, now we pick the lock and sneak in the back way.
Haze: All this for some chocolate that'll give us food poisoning?
Yami Haze: Hey, if the health defartment or whatever it's called said the shop could be re-opened...
Haze: Good point. But why don't we just go in the FRONT like everyone else and BUY some chocolate?
Yami Haze: Because I say so.
| Insanity Prelude chapter 2 . 1/12/2003
Haze: I'm confused.
Aikaya: DC, I just thought of something. Should we be reading Kingdom Hearts fics? They might spoil part of the storyline for you or something.
Avida: HEY! Being the voice of reason is MY job!
Aikaya: I thought we both had that job.
Avida: Oh. Good point.
| Insanity Prelude chapter 1 . 1/12/2003
Aikaya: The power of a keyboard, ROFL...
Avida: I don't know, I prefer the power of a Keyblade. _ *twirls Flower Keyblade, accidentally whacking Epsilon in the face with it*
Haze: Uh, DC, shouldn't you be asleep?
DC: Yes. But does that usually stop me? No.