Reviews for How Naruto Should have end
FOXJ chapter 4 . 12/27/2014
What the hell are you talking about this chapter was awesome. You solved many of the potholes that Kishimoto left unfinished, and you did it in a spectacular way.
Politics and what not can be boring but you writing of it was great.

Sakura waking up Naruto was certainly an interesting read, especially how she had to wake up the heavy sleeper, lol.

I really enjoyed how you handled Kabuto's reason for pleading guilty as well as Team Taka's reasons, including Orochimaru, on what would they choose given Sasuke's freedom or death.

Seriously, everything from Kabuto's redemption, to Sasuke's clarification on his clan for being his reason, as well as Orochimaru finally absolving to just be there for Sasuke was HOW the manga should have resolved these specific issues.

Also, Naruto's input on what to do with them, the tailed beasts, and the 5-1 nation & samurai-ninja alliance was purely an excellent show of his character maturing and him developing the skill needed of him as a future Hokage.

Aside of that, good work with announcing the verdict, sounds like an actual jury.

But especially, i enjoyed very much how you brought up the issue of personal escorts to Emphasizes how Naruto and Sasuke are still ranked genin and Sakura a chunin. It made me laugh very,very, very much reading that especially since having Sasuke and Naruto participate in a chunin exams would be overrated if not hilarious as hell. Seriously, most competitors would just avoid anything to do with them and let them just battle it out at the end. Either way, very funny. Good job working that unresolved issue as well in, yet i feel for/but understand why Naruto has to take the jonin exam without Kurama.

Well thats all for my review this was certainly a heck of a chapter despite you saying so otherwise. Maybe its just me, but hey i really did enjoy it as whole. :D

Until next time, sees you later and take care.

Peace
FOXJ
NS 4EVER
FOXJ NS 4EVER chapter 3 . 12/26/2014
Overall, the grieving was a well thought out chapter in which you closed the holes in some of canon's disappointment.

Tsunade reiterating the will of fire to the Leaf

Naruto comforting Hinata was much needed regardless of what people think.
Just wish you would have resolved her declaration of love during the Pein battle but thats probably to come soon enough.

Sakura supportive as ever for Ino during this time of extreme grief and need for solace.

Choji reaffirming to Shikamaru that Team 10 will always be there for one another. Having Shikamaru have a bag of chips for Choji on standby was a nice touch as well.

Lastly, even though you didnt give us Naruto's conversation with Sasuke, Naruto talking about Obito to Kakashi and his forever constant dream of Hokage was certainly a good read.

Now to see what Sasuke and his gang's fate will be. .
FOXJ NS 4EVER chapter 2 . 12/26/2014
Interesting way to go about having Sakura's long asked question solved.
Its hard to imagine that actually happening but it is the most likely event to happen for Sakura to discover what happened that day.

Aside from that,nice job handling a resolution for Sakura's love for Sasuke. Even adding some humor into the mix did the chapter a hell of good.

Can't wait to read what happens in grieving as well as where Sakura's new questions lead her to, lol.
FOXJ NS 4EVER chapter 1 . 12/26/2014
Simple. Short. Sweet.
Everything that easily could have been the start to the end for the series.

You really did a great job if you were going for fixing the OOC of their character from the aftermath of their fight. Now this is more appropriate for how they should have interacted than what Kishimoto wrote.

Especially that quick input from Naruto on Sakura's forehead.

Overall, thanks a lot for writing this story. Looking forward to how your story plays out for all of the characters.

Happy Holidays
FOXJ NS 4EVER
narusaku143 chapter 9 . 12/23/2014
Love it. Narusaku forever!
Elder Sibling chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
Not that I care for Naruhina but I feel your title for this story is quite radical
61394 chapter 9 . 12/20/2014
good story
and really
infinitebliss321 chapter 6 . 11/18/2014
Really good story, can't wait for next chapter, update soon:-)
OP555 chapter 4 . 11/14/2014
Your story rocks
NenkotaMoon chapter 1 . 11/14/2014
Sad
luqie10 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
As for your saying it should b narusaku, I disagree, coz everytym naruto needed some one, hinata was there, nt once had sakura saved his life or said that she love him, she's always loved sasuke, n besides wat kinder stupid would you b, if u ended up wit someone who bullied you wen u were young? So as 4 you saying it should b narusaku that would've been da worst possible ending
Shimo no ko chapter 1 . 11/9/2014
Interesting story. Update soon!
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