Reviews for The Ball is in Your Court
Effexor chapter 8 . 2/4/2015
Oh-oh-oh... Time for Will to do something silly... I guess he's asking Charlie to leave Jane, and I fear that because of that Lizzie choses to trust Wickham :/

Whatever, did I tell you that I laughed couple of times thanks to you?
Effexor chapter 7 . 2/4/2015
Hi Swanpix!

(First, I apologize for my English... I'm french, and if I can read yous story, I have to improve my "speaking level"!)

I just wanted to say that I LOVE your story. I felt some kind of craving for modern P&P stories, there's not much french fanfics, and I found yours... And I am already in love with both Lizzie and Darcy!

Each time I read P&P or a P&P fanfic I pray that Lizzie doesn't trust Wickham, each time I am so disappointed! So currently (I just finished the chap 7) I hope that your Lizzie will listen to her sixth sense and keep being careful about "Jérémy"! The future will tell. But I don't mind, as long as Will and Lizzie have their happy end :)

Merci for the story! I stop here the review, I have a few chapters to read!
EvelynRo chapter 33 . 2/4/2015
BEST EPILOGUE EVER! The sports reporter interview was brilliant. The whole book was brilliant. I've read and loved both of your books. Dare we hope for a third.

P.S. Thank you for the author's notes along the way providing clarification, but totally unnecessary. I hate it when an author writes down to their audience and love it when you think we are clever.
EvelynRo chapter 31 . 2/4/2015
I adore how you write conversation. It is natural and well paced. Not stilted and stunted as one sees so often in fan fiction. I can both hear and see your characters conversing.
EvelynRo chapter 19 . 2/3/2015
Okay, I know this is already completed but if he didn't kiss her soon I was going to scream. This is angst and misunderstanding and pride and prejudice but these are young adults with hormones a d needs after all.

As for the nay Sayers, don't let them bother you. Growing up with basketball playing brothers, I think you are portraying the book and sport well.
KurukiXV chapter 33 . 1/17/2015
I'm so late reviewing on this chapter! I rwally enjoyed the conclusion of this story. I think it's great that Will and Ellie get their happy ending but that it's shown in a realistic light. It ends up being relatable. Thank you for writing a great story!
Tatertotrocks chapter 33 . 1/17/2015
Loved it. Awesomeness. The end.
brokenblackangel chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
I loved this story :) So much brilliance in there, and Darcy and Elizabeth both felt so genuine and true.
Lilylun chapter 33 . 1/10/2015
A beautiful story!
DemolitionLvr chapter 33 . 1/8/2015
I gotta be honest, I did not expect to love this story. I, like Ellie, am not a lover of basketball. But I decided to try the story because I'd read your other one, and it's been a while since I read a modern AU. And I loved this. There's something really powerful that comes from writing about what you know. you obviously drew very much from your own experience, and that brought a lot of accuracy and detail and thought into a subject I'd never considered, and created a wonderful backdrop to let the story play out. The liberties you took with the general plot were well placed, in my opinion, and the characters were, if not the same as Austen wrote them, changed for good reason, logically, and all very entertaining. Also, regarding the criticisms you received on your portrayal of college life, every college is different with housing, so I saw no problem, and people who complain about minor details like that are shmucks. Again, I loved your story, it took me completely by surprise, but I'm so glad I gave it a chance. Cheers!
Chyannss chapter 33 . 1/5/2015
Loved this story sooooooo much. Nice ending!
pan chapter 33 . 1/4/2015
Great story, thanks for sticking with it and finishing it. Please continue writing c:
CathySylvie chapter 33 . 1/3/2015
Thanks so much for this story, I loved it! Best wishes for you and your family in the upcoming year,
Thanks again,
Cathy :) xxxx
LadyRuthless chapter 33 . 1/5/2015
Thank you so much for this story. Really enjoyed it!
Guest chapter 33 . 1/3/2015
What a fantastic story loved the ending so much, and loved reading the whole thing really. Well done!
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