Author, please come back, this is very interesting!

He better have his reality marble

Why didn’t he just get the whole information all at once instead of every other day he learned something different she lives with him can’t she just tell him everything and stop you know procrastinating

Interesting liliana ended up with shiro

There's a lot of little things in this story that bother me and they're piling up as I read. First was Voban's loss but that only initially bothered me as I can take that as a sort of perfect storm situation happening where Shirou had the right authorities to make Voban underestimate him up until he snatched the win right from under him. Second, Voban definitely shouldn't have stuck around if you're just going to use him for rote exposition(you even skipped most of it and left Shirou with such an incomplete idea of what a campione is). It's pretty frustrating to see you use the oldest campione in such a boring way. Third is the continuing trend of Shirou being so damn ignorant whether it comes to his own abilities or even the world around him. He doesn't do anything to rectify this at all and then somehow comes out on top in another fight he hasn't prepared for at all. There's more but basically, i just wanted to say that several aspects of the story are rough

This story isn't complete garbage, but still bad in my opinion, there's a lot of plot holes that I can't even begin to point out, however I'd say the most obvious ones, Shirou in this story is incredibly dumb. I mean he's dumb but not this stupidly dumb.

Every fight in this one, is like some sort of shonen fight, where there's drama, angast and suddenly 'determination' it's cringe.

There's also this unrealistic portrayal of the series mage organization, where they act brazen and arrogant little dick heads like they meant something.

No, these people feared Campione because there's literally nothing they can do to stop them, everyone who is part of a mage organization know's that and fears them because of what they can do.

Either way, there's also this dumb plot of hiding his identity even though it's obvious and there's also the fact that a Miko could immediately recognize that they're a Campione.

Therefore this whole hide his identity thing is frankly dumb as fuck and to be honest.

I don't know how the feck this fanfic got this many follows despite undeserving of its reputation.

You know I realized that the plot of this story is quite repetitive, it lacks something. Like always there's this girl who's going to be a weak point. It already happened multiple times in this story. Not to mention it's a blt cringe...

Anyway, there's too much angst to this story like, every single battle literally. We don't need that much drama.

Goudou needs to die. And so do 'Real Shirou' and Saber. Good chapter.

This is shit. Mc is nerfed to hell.

Bro what the fuck is up with all your stupid author notes being longer then the story stop doing that shit

Why did Shirou put in so much effort in his match? If he wanted to stay undercover couldn't he not bring out the style of Archer?

what the fuck this story was going so wellthen sudden apocalypsecollapse fucks everything? this isnt F:G O.

I really tried to give it a shot but holy fuck do I despise the very being of Emiya Shirou.
Absolutely and utterly dumb with no consideration towards how things simply have to be if it means some people get hurt to keep others safe.

well this is trash bye.

I disliked the whole mind control that Shirou is clearly under that's forcing him to fight Voban