Reviews for Champion of a Distant Dream |
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 um- this is the guy who suggested the campione cross over. I didn't think you'd write it right now. don't get me wrong: i'm glad I gave you the idea and am honored that you both curse me and bless me for it. and honestly, you tried that with sword of origin and we all know how that ended up. so let me give you another idea, one week you wright two, like "live to lie" and this one week, "sword of origin" and "scattered memories" another week, and you just wright "a fulfilling nightmare" whenever you get a minute since that's what you said you were dong before. |
alpha95 chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 So, is it like the portion of his soul that contained his element and origin alignment [Sword] is what makes up SWORD Emiya's soul and the rest is what makes up TRUE Shirou's soul? Because that what it seems like. (You just know that you now HAVE to find a way for them to meet, maybe in another story, after all having a damaged/incomplete soul is NOT GOOD, just look at Zouken Makiri *shiver*.) I just hope there is a happy ending for Normal Ending Shirou Emiya in the future ... or at least the parts that used to be him. |
Lone Gundam chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Holy shit, this idea is awesome as hell! I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this, such a brilliant idea. |
serialkeller chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Great start, much prefer this already to Sword of Origin |
eh chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Is he still the 6th? He's going to run everyone over. |
C chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Interesting premise. I'll be looking forward to future updates. :) |
ultima-owner chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Shirou will live an amazing life in the new world |