Reviews for Champion of a Distant Dream
Mangoose chapter 22 . 4/13/2019
Damn it you keep dragging things out. If you want to kill a character, then kill them. You revive someone from death only to kill them again or have them suffer later. Make up your mind.
krzys2000 chapter 23 . 3/29/2019
Good chapter update soon!
slydino chapter 23 . 3/29/2019
Wonderful chapter. I'm glad to see this story isn't dead and now seems to have some cohesion to it. Anyway great job and keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Nikkless chapter 10 . 2/21/2019
didint like this arc
Nikkless chapter 7 . 2/21/2019
still dont like that he dosent have his UBW hope when he gets reality marble again he can get the weapons from UBW as well.
Nikkless chapter 3 . 2/21/2019
Archer had at least range of 4km with the bow
Nikkless chapter 3 . 2/21/2019
hope shirou has more magical circuits than before.
ManyFetch chapter 1 . 1/25/2019
"All Heaven" ... is this a secret crossover with Er Gen's Xianxia webnovel I Shall Seal The Heavens?
i like cheese chapter 16 . 1/18/2019
the battles are fine, i guess. though, like way too many stories, the hero pulls a victory out of his ass. i can live with that.
but the relationships are just absolute and utter bullshit ... sigh... but then this is just one among many stories with such going on.
i like cheese chapter 14 . 1/18/2019
i'm really hoping that you didn't have shiro fall in love with liliana.
other than that, you've got a fairly decent story going. nothing too great, especially for those of us who don't know all that much about the nasuverse, since you explain pretty much nothing.
Ramax Viscurio chapter 23 . 1/7/2019
This story sucks. Good job, you ruined it.
sonic chapter 23 . 12/28/2018
I liked the chapter!
reality deviant chapter 23 . 12/26/2018
feels like you doomed godou...
he is now like Sayaka, Mami Tomoe, and other Puella MAgi about to become Witches-all because a cute little Kyuubey tricked them!

did you have to cast him in such a tragic role? and how much worse will it get?
and while in this situation godou falls to despair and Dark Side, Shirou seems not a showing of godou bad, shirou emiya good...

while in truth, had you lay a similrly tailor to personality series of incidents for Shirou...
He would have turned Alter, and have been the monstrous one.

at this point, it feels like Godou will either die a villain or get a moment of realization and perhaps attempt at redemption in death. Unless somehow there will be Reset/rewrite of the world to undo the shit that happened.

I, Personally find myself disliking the first two options, and the third as one that is likely to put to question the struggle here...

there may be other options, and you may surprise me, but these are my thoughts on the matter, and they are not pleasing.
Ferdiad chapter 23 . 12/26/2018
Damn Godou is fucked.
nobodyreallyimportant chapter 23 . 12/25/2018
My, now things are really picking up aren’t they.
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