|Reviews for First Time, Every Time|
| UKReader chapter 11 . 1/9/2015
Something word is going on. This is a review for "off the beaten path". Chapters are getting mixed up - or maybe I am!
Ok so I know this was filling my (very random) prompt, but it blew me away. I loved this soooooooooo much. Chapter length was brilliant and really allowed the story space to blossom. A bit like our Wren. This has to be one of my favourites. Til you write the next one that is! Xx
| UKReader chapter 10 . 1/8/2015
Oh, I loved this one. Is that it? Can there be more?
Loved breakfast with the Durin's - it was like the Walton's going over to the dark side.
Ooooh, I'm salivating at the prospect of the prompt - I can't remember which one it is though, so looking forward to the surprise too! The joys of early onset...
| Wynni chapter 10 . 1/8/2015
This is heartily approved. I likes it.
and really interesting using the other grumpus' point of view.
I think it makes it even better _
| Skywolf42 chapter 10 . 1/7/2015
Aww thank you!
That was fantastically written as always. I love the way you incorporated my prompt! Reactions of the Durin family at the table... Hilarious!
And of course the ending dialogue...
Thorin is so sweet...
I look forward to the next update!
| Selania Nightwood chapter 9 . 1/4/2015
"Over the Hill" could definitely turn into an interesting story XD
| Wynni chapter 9 . 1/4/2015
Well, at least he was done when he turned around, else this would have entered a whole new level of awkward. Here is yet another begging for more chapters, I think. I just wish I could think of a decent prompt.
This has to be the funniest and most awkward meeting to date, bar none, I think.
Could it be his leg isn't as beyond repair as they think it is? Maybe?
| Jamberine chapter 9 . 1/4/2015
Oh, i'd love a continuation of this one!
| Mya Croft chapter 9 . 1/4/2015
Really enjoyed this one! A part 2 would be lovely!
| Skywolf42 chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
OMG yes please!
That time when Thorin kissed Wren because he couldn't stop the urge and a Raven, thinking he might be attacking Wren, attacked him to protect it's keeper, cawing and battering him mercilessly with it's talons, beak and wings...
I don't know. Half asleep. Seems funny to me. Lol
| UKReader chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
Hey! Not logged in.
Lovely, lovely update. Oh, yes please to part 2. How about Thorin embarrasses himself a second time while Wren cannot find anything she needs?
| Just4Me chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
As disappointing as the movie was, there were certainly some beautiful and memorable scenes. Hopefully there will be even more when the extended version comes out. Somehow I like this old, wounded-soldier side of Thorin. But then again, I like just about any side of Thorin. So yes please - give us more!
| dearreader chapter 9 . 1/3/2015
Another great story that begs for a part 2. As for a prompt, ummm. Don't know. I would think now that Wren has had her isolation broken, eventually, she will be become friends with her grateful King and we all know what happens joyfully in the end. Perhaps there could be a tunnel collapse and Wren could save him with her magic a second time. Only this time he would remember it, and Wren would have to reveal herself to people in order to rescue him from the stone he was trapped under. She would have to overcome her shyness (very difficult) and Thorin would have to overcome his gruffness. But eventually, of course they are together happily ever after. Your choice, mountain or other place, or maybe half and half. Whatever you write is always "ace".
| UKReader chapter 7 . 12/11/2014
Oh, that was so cute and so sassy. Love it (again).
| Just4Me chapter 7 . 12/9/2014
She's like a combination of Wren and Thea. And still endlessly appealing to Thorin.
| Just4Me chapter 8 . 12/9/2014
God, little Kili and Fili are so cute, they're killing me. And Thorin thinking all he has to do is feed them and put them to bed. And yes, of course I want to read more. I really want to see grown-up Wren meet Thorin again.