A very good story, a quality that I would have expected to pay for. Thank you for the hard work!

Wow I can’t say I’m disappointed. It was all around good read. 8/10 ending seems kinda lacking but so do most of Coeur’s stories, the endings are always the hardest part.

Rereading this, i'm so proud of how far you've come Couer. Thank you for continuing to write up to this day.

AWESOME WORK

That was dark as fuck in the last 5 chapters but that epilogue made up for it

poor Blake, her fried is brain

Wow reading Couers noob ass author notes is funny as hell

Lmao, I love how Jaune referred to Ruby as a ‘romantic option’.

Man I hate ending I wish there's more

It's so f**king good

This was... it is a beatiful story man, I honestly have no words to describe what I feel about this fic. Well done, this is amazing.

Awesome story. You could have a mini sequel chronicling the exhibition. Make some earth changing monumental discoveries.

So this is the story that you started with on this account. I'll admit I only picked it up to save my curiosity on your Arc Royale story, but I enjoyed it for what it is. This story shows its age as many aspects of the tale were overridden in cannon, I see flaws in the pacing and grammar, but it was enjoyable to read and grow with the characters. The romance accomplished the goals you set out to do excellently, it was a slow burn that felt plausible throughout most of its run. Anyway, great story, keep up your excellent work!

I’ve re-read this fic quite a few times. Somehow, this is the first time I realized Jaune kills the beowolf he’s protecting Blake from after he loses the use of his shield arm. I must have always assumed help had arrived by that point.

This scene ends up being significantly more badass than I remember.

beautiful