Why must you tease me with Lancaster. Speaking about Lancaster, have you done any fics about the pair?

bahahaha love the ending

These nightmarish creatures can be felled, they can be beaten!

ah, well, gotta keep up morale somehow.

and this is where the fun began.

very very nice story, just like the others, top tier, epico

If you don’t like the author notes, don’t read them and just read the story, fool.

Loved the story, it was awesome

I still find myself coming back to this stories. I just love the ride your on as you read through it. The characterizations are great and consistent. I would love to read a story about them as adults with Jaune and Ren adventuring and exploring and how their lives are now that they are older.

Great story, love the ending

I know this story is older, and I've actually largely enjoyed the plot so far, but I'm going to stop reading now. Honestly, the author's notes just kind of turned me off in general, and this one was the last straw. Instead of letting me enjoy your story for what it was (and you're a good writer, so it's a shame), at the end of this chapter, you gave away a plot point! This isn't the first time, either- you might think they're reassuring, but I don't want to be told what relationships will and won't develop outside the main pairing, or how a character will handle an emotional situation. I want to be surprised. I want to be along for the ride, not jarred out of it constantly.
Other times, your notes were just fussing about reviews or PMs you disliked, none of which I as a reader am privy to when going through your story, and none of which I care about. Let me form my own opinions about your story without hearing your responses to what others have said.
The best thing you could do for this story, other than posting it on AO3, would be to remove all of the author's notes except for any VERY pertinent information (such as what headcanons you went with that have since been changed in canon, for example). Delete the chapter asking whether you should use an original arc and spoiling what it's about, too- I scrolled when I realized what it was, but LET YOUR READERS ENJOY YOUR STORY without getting in your own way. I was planning to read something else of yours as well, but I don't think I'll open that tab now, because I expect more of the same.
Again, you really do have talent, and I'm not disparaging your skills at all. I just figure it's potentially worth telling you that this particular habit has lost you at least one reader, so that you might have the opportunity to think about changing.

What a story really ended up enjoying this story despite an initially slow build up.

I really enjoyed how in character and natural it felt with little magical resolution of emotions.

Wooo Atlas!

Holy crap, I knew we should've expected the wyvern given all the vytal festival comments, but this was still a surprise to me

Guess it's final boss time!

Ruby being brave for her family and hiding her pain, is so in character, I wanted to cry for all of them, this was really well written