Love the story please post the next chapter

So will naruto ever be able to use hirishen like his father or will this drawback hang over his head throughout the whole story? Also the drawback wasn’t needed nobody expects naruto to learn the hirishen in two months especially when he just started learning fuinjutsu two months ago you could have just waited until after the time skip to give him hirishen instead of nerfing it like that

So far it is just okay but this is just my opinion but I just don't see Naruto being able to becoming as fast as your making him to be in a little over a month that and with his kenjutsu but oh well

So far the story is okay my thing is there is no way Naruto can get so fast and strong in just a couple weeks but oh well

I guess I can check this story out again

It's not bad but a bit anticlimactic for my taste the meeting of Naruto's parents, his reaction, the villagers, the 3rd Hokage all is more or less instantly forgiven or has little to no direct consequences. That's not how people really react and far more tame than a M rating would suggest.
Doesn't mean it's a bad story, but I personally have a bit of problems with the always forgive and forget type of Naruto. I don't need a dramafest but where the hell is the Anger ? If I'm imprisoned for 12 years and find out that my son was treated worse than shit and my dieing wish was ignored there is no way in hell I'm sitting on my hands.

Your story is really as a page turner Keep writing please

i really enjoy the fights in this story so far though im not too sure about hijiri and her power tbh

I'm awful with riddles, so I feel so satisfied with myself that I understood Naruto's riddle right away! And I love that it was Kushina that both helped Hinata and gave her the test. Hinata was smart for figuring out something wasn't quite right about the brown haired woman!
Also, just a note, I had the same idea about an Uzumaki taijutsu style being based on water and flowing around the attacker to avoid them before attacking. I've been working on a fanfic of my own and had put that in there, so it's cool we both had the same idea!

Ha! Minato totally deserved that prank!

Danzo was seriously an idiot for thinking he could ever confine Minato and Kushina! Those two are far too strong! I hope their return will be able to help Naruto.

i have to say - u seem to be pretty good at writing fight scences in these few chapters

user guest i don't know what ur problem , though the story lack in some chapters i don't think it is that bad! please if u want to critic , don't bad mouthing the story!

The story is good but it is full of shit since the chunin exam started.

'We don't need a chunin incapable of showing kindness.'
- What the fuck? In that case fire half of the shinobi force! They are assassins for fucks sake. Such a criterium is NOT possible.

Kushina aiding Hinata and then straight out passing her for no apparent reason without any test...
- Again, why?

Sakura getting 'fail' straight away without even one word exchanged between her and her examiner.
- I mean... ugh. That was the laziest thing the author could have done.

Sasuke's test was literally playing with children! FOR FUCKS SAKE!
- That is NOT a chunin exam! That's more like applying for a job as a kindergarten teacher!

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So far, I am not impressed.

Amazing story, great job! But I feel as if Naruto and the rest along his age are too weak, aren't they? Compared to the likes of monsters like Hijiri, Orochimaru, and the other villains. Well, anyway, it's a great story, and good job!