Reviews for Making Up For Lost Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() what did he mean i have a family do? |
![]() ![]() not interested with this story I'm looking for Percy Jacckson fanfic where just the gods and Chiron and Dionysus read Percy Jackson no demigods are with them! one chapter mentions hades complaining of being the villain within animated Hercules, please type it within your comments I'm not an online talker |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you or our response keep with the fanfic love the how is going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice to see both Sasuke and Sakura developing. Now if Naruto will only not get too blindly focused. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting choices for the summonings. And giving the orcas the ability to fly is inspired. |
![]() ![]() Really promising start and a relatively rare plot. However your pacing is terrible and why bother not letting the village know about what Danzo did to Minato and Kushina, having them hide and letting people continue to screw with Naruto just for the sake of ‘plot’ is the dumbest decision ever. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this book |
![]() ![]() ![]() i want chapter 25 nowww and i might pay you |
![]() ![]() ![]() Naruto y Hinata no tienen sentido como pareja quedan nejor como amigos. |
![]() ![]() Love this just have to ask will you update your Digimon story? |
![]() ![]() ![]() where is the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Binged the shit out of this I love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hopefully they get to Fu in time with Tsunade. We'll see. It might be tougher with no Oorchimaru to help cause incentives one way or another here. And seems Kabuto and Kimimaro are working now to get Orochimaru back. Oh joy. Good chapter overall, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The s rank secret, Naruto's parentage, being hidden was one of the dumbest and weakest justifications alongside Hiashi being liable for killing the Kumo diplomat when he was kidnapping Hinata (the fuck is your one kumo nin is separated from the main diplomat party and none of the other kumo noticed? Bs). Literally everyone knew Naruto was the ninetails sacrifice because of Danzo, yes, including the other 4 nations. And Literally everyone in Konoha who knew Kushina was married, and pregnant as well, to Minato. And if they didn't, wouldn't you know it, the one Uzumaki kid, the Uzumaki canonically the only bloodline that handle the immense corruption that Kurama's Chakra bears, has blue eyes and blond hair. It's such a piss poor retcon plot point fumble that makes Hiruzen downright loony tunes villainous like a lot of Dumbledore bashings. Rant over |
![]() ![]() ![]() But that's not what happened. Danzo was the one who leaked Naruto's status to the Village. This would give them another reason to want to kill the man |