I like how you mixed up the Konoha Crush. I feel like I don't know what is going to happen next.

Anko isn't wearing revealing clothing at all. What she is wearing under trench coat is an armored mesh designed to protect her vital organs. It's not a fishnet. Not in the slightest and I wish more people realized this.

On the thing with Narutoverse tech. My head fanon is that Naruto takes place on a sub continent about twice the size of Australia on Earth. In the Pacific Ocean, but somewhat out of phase with the rest of us. Particularly the Harry Potter verse Earth and that the Veil of Death is a gateway to the Elemental Nations (it opens to the ruins of an ancient city in Nations). The tech is imported from the rest of the world Some of it are computers from the 1990's Some tech are the latest shit. It all depends on when it's imported. Each of the Elemental Nations have agents in the Outer Lands who secure tech and supplies from there, as such I have no problem with the Uzumaki family having access to a flat screen.

So far I like what you've done with the story. I also like how you made Naruto's instinctive understanding of fuinjutsu a bloodline.

Huh...are you not going to have Orochimaru use his technique he uses in canon to survive? His soul is technically in his various Curse Seals, and it is in fact Anko's that is used to bring him back after Sasuke offs him in canon.

It's one of the annoying things about his character, in my opinion. I'd have preferred him being dead for good, but they didn't keep him dead in canon.

Anyways, excellent fight, and nice explanation on the Rasengan there. Keep it up.

Damn, You killed Kiba!

I REALLY hope Ino just stays friends. I wouldn't be able to keep reading if it turns into yet another harem fic...

Now that was a good fight and one where the ending truly shifted things around for this story. Makes me wonder what will happen when Tsunade and Jiraiya learn about the death, the actual real death of their former teammate ?

Please do keep up the great work on this amazing story as I cannot wait to see where it goes from here.

I'm gonna be honest, as much as I like this story, Tayuya's whole "I'm the one who swears every two words!" gimmick is getting very annoying, very quickly... Having a foul mouth is one thing, but it being her defining character trait just makes her unlikable. You could tone it down just a bit.

Epic I say epic indeed welp snakes gone and the pupppetier stalks the shadow oh I love to see his demise

I lkie this story Except You say Orochimaru is dead Did you forget about the curse of seal And why didn't he summon himself with a snake back to the cave and i cant stand Hijiri Not because she man handled Minato and Kushina and Supposedly killed Orochimaru I get that they where not at 100% but I'm just one person and my opinion doesn't matter other than that keep up the good work

Well, orochimaru is nor reeeeeaaally dead
He still has fragments of his soul in the cursed Mark's around the world

NICE! I can't wait to see what happens next! Keep up the great work.

Awesome work please continue the story

good chap

Pop goes the Pedorochi-bubu...