Reviews for Making Up For Lost Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, so Orochimaru is 'dead' though I wonder if he is truly dead since the cursed seals of heaven are around or will they be destroyed as well to make him really dead anyway keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good chapter. I have no problem with Orochimaru being dead early. One question and you may want to edit something in to account for this. Why didnt Orochimaru have a snake reverse summon him to the Ryuci Caves. Hijiri couldn't follow him there |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder if Naruto could walk on air? It sounds like a reasonable extension or step up from water walkign. Or perhaps he could use Chakra Control to bend light? Defense from the Infinite Tsukuyomi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your OC is eating this fic |
![]() ![]() really love the story and looking forward to more. Although Naruto/Ino is my favorite parring I much prefer Naruto and one girl, and this started as a Naruto/Hinata story. Also really Love Hijiri as a character though I hope she will be more than just Naruto's Itachi. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Longest chapter yet? Sorry don’t see that as being true. The only way it is, is if your counting all the author notes with it. And that is something that I will never do. This chapter is average at best. You may have added about 1,000 words to the chapter. That is me being generous because your notes take away more from the story then they do in helping it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please Excuse my Uzumaki but... THIS STORY IS FUCKING AWESOME! FUCK YEAH! FUCKING DANZO IS GETTING HIS PANSY ASS HUNTED DOWN LIKE THE PUSSY HE IS! NARUTO IS BECOMING A FUCKING END GAME BOSS BITCH! KUSHINA AND MINATO ARE STILL AFUCKING ALIVE! KARIN IS GETTING QUALITY FUCKING TIME WITH HER FUCKING FAMILY! AND FU AND NARUTO ARE FRIENDS THIS IS TOTALLY BITCHING! Now, above all. I CANNOT WAIT FOR THE FUCKING, BITCH, ASSFACED SHIT STAIN WASTE OF HUMANITY SPACE THAT IS HIJIRI TO DIE A CUNTS DEATH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Revenge... THEY WILL HAVE THEIR REVENGE! BEATH THE SHITH OUTH DANZO! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well...I am hoping that Danzo walks away with a big fat nothing from Uzu. Even if this was just canon Danzo a-hole doesn't deserve a damn thing except to see his men die and his plans go up in smoke. And this one is worse for taking away Minato and Kushina. Guess well see, won't we? and Orochimaru...well, we'll see if Hijiri can put him down. Doubt it, honestly, he's too damn hard to kill with everything he did in canon. Especially since thanks to Anko and the other Curse Seals, he can't die. At least till they're gone. Anyways, good work, keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, nice to see the group recovering, Ino growing as a person, and her and Hinata hopefully won't get into a fight if she goes for Naruto. And now the mission is on to retrieve Tsunade. That should be interesting. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far the story seems ok the only thing I dont like about it is the bloodline Naruto has called Mugen Toshokan with that wouldnt it make Naruto to become god-like strong in the sealing arts |
![]() ![]() ![]() Would like to see the three way romance Very underrated |
![]() ![]() ![]() So is it going to be a naruto,Fu,Hinata and Ino? |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great chapter, thank you for writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good chapter, oh look an OC, and i smell OP...hate her already. Don't take it personally, maybe you write her in a way that grows on me, but my default with OCs is hate them, and if they are even a little bit OP? Even more so. Liked the part where Sasuke used the sharingan to predict all the moves. |