|Reviews for Bloodline|
| A Newt chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Some great action in here! Love the description of the fight scenes with the Templars. Your story could use another read through for editing purposes.
I was surprised to see Hawka let Fenris walk out with her children. Hawke would be a fierce mother and I have a hard time believing she'd let anyone walk away with her babies, even Fenris.
| Dragongirllover chapter 1 . 11/12/2014
Please dont leave it like that. I loved it even though it was short.