Beautiful and bittersweet. One of the most original stories I've ever read. Though there are a few typos, the writing is great: conversations are realistically stilted, relationships build up slowly, actions have consequence (such as follow throughs by the parents in phoning the police), and atmospheric scenes which are so richly detailed that I found myself re-reading the foggy castle chapters simply to relive it again. I loved it all. Thank you!

Wow, that was beautiful. The rainy mood all through the story, the steady voice, the tangles of the plot. Do you have original works?

Brilliant bittersweet ending! I like how Hermione keeps the stone.

This was absolutely heart breaking! It had me constantly hoping and expecting that they would find it! I wanted more than anything for them to have a happy ending, not that they didn't sorta get one. But what did happen was over all devastating, and I loved it! You wove a tale that drew me in and kept me on edge. I normally don't like Dark! fics but your's was amazing!

This fic was absolutely great and very unique. It just made my brain spin a lot. The ending was bittersweet but just right.

Wow. This just sucked me in, made me stay up half the night because I couldn't put it down, and ultimately made me cry while still being happy with the ending. Amazing. I think I need to check out your other works.

It's been a long time since I first got into your stories. Hermione's Diary was my first love & Snapes my second. Now, this seems ready to take up a position on my favorite stories list as well. I'm unsure of what's going on and I love it when a story opens up and leaves you with questions. It makes me want to read it even more. Very nicely done for a first chapter, m'lady Wonk ;-) I know you changed your name but you'll always be Wonk to me lololol

Amazing. I have no adequate words to describe what I I'm feeling about this story. I just know that despite my busy day, I had to keep going. Yes, I'm in tears, but I am not unhappy. There's a melancholy I feel about one timeline and a different sadness about the other. Yet both are satisfying and wonderful. I think your done a marvelous job.

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I love this type of premise. Great start!

I think that was a very kind ending. you really have a gift for bringing your characters to life

aw, that was so heart wrenchingly sweet. I am glad that you aren't evil... I hope you know that it's a joke, I wouldn't really have thought you anything less than brilliant, but somehow you seem exceptional brilliant with that last well placed word.

you are a genius... although I am being to wonder if you are an evil geniusbrilliant story at every single step.

I absolutely needed to leave you a review for this story - this is by far, one of the best, and most original HP fanfics I have ever read, and I thoroughly enjoyed it! Absolutely Brilliant!

~Bree

I have no clue how this world will become right or how they'll learn to live in it but I love the suspense and honestly the psychological perspective.