This is good so far. Pretty well written. I have only see the first three episodes of the show though.

you've pretty much cut out the shows characters here I like telltales storyline but please for your other fics please change it up a little bit

clem wasn't even in her treehouse in this they met at Lee's house and she saved him from his wife right? did I miss something

again you mention the pizza car that got half of it's tires shot out crushed shot to pieces and is missing every window isn't that thing destroyed by now?

how TF is Glenn's pizza car still working it got fucked up back at the estates and they left in the rv I thought

but carley wasn't the one who shot tdog was why is he congratulating her for taking a shot

I don't like that your playing this out exactly like canon tbh they had a whole bag full of guns and outnumbered the St Johns quite heavily yet they still got captured

I get the feeling Jim is gonna replace mark here

And I love your story you keep doing it cuz I will like that story you may cuz I mean I just like it better than watching it and playing the game

On can you tell that writer that made that story called AMC The Walking Dead (With Telltale characters) cuz I really like that story and I want to see how it all ends since I've been watching all the series of The Walking Dead and The Walking Dead Telltale cuz I like all the people that makes the stories of the crossover between The Walking Dead and The Walking Dead Telltale so you can make a very big group and you can change everything and it can make everyone in the group like you can trust people and you know that's family to you since in that story that he may it's like a family you got to protect like there

Oh and for you make where the governor returns can you make him like run into that tank group and Carver's group since I'm can you make a vote where you want to keep the walking Dead 400 days characters like Bonnie since she was good in season 2 telltale in course most of the characters in season 2 telltale like luck's group and Mike and Jane in that group that Clementine in Jane ran into at the end of the season

Oh by the way can you have the AMC The walking Dead characters in the story since you're making it like the comic the walking Dead story oh and can you please keep like most of the walking Dead telltale characters alive since Rick's group is a little bit big and can you make Lee's arm missing arm like Merle Dixon or that one that has picture of him has his hair grown out and has something attached to his arm it's on Google of season 2 if he was alive

Hey wow man can you make more of these chapters a really good everyone loves how it begins everyone wants to know how it ends

Rick and Lee are actually excellent at handling other people when they work together. Both have a natural charisma, Lee is better at talking people down, trusting them, Rick's better at taking control of a situation.

So essentially... they have to go through everything they did in the show and the game, with a little extra thrown in there. You sir are sadistic.