Reviews for Hunter of the Copy Wheel Eye |
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![]() ![]() ![]() It's good to see a writer remembering that unlocking the Sharingan creates a connection to the brain that stimulates negativity. The "Curse of Hatred", in a rather literal sense. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This guy has six girls. |
![]() ![]() ![]() his Kakashi is showing |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is as if kekashi was shoved into junes body. not june with eye powers. although he does have eye powers. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so mad at myself for not finding this years sooner. I love the multi crossovers that are being used and you have done a good job of blending them here. I get that an immortal like Ozpin thinks in term of the macro/longevity which disconnects him from caring for the people he is going to sacrifice. And makes him only think of others as pawns unless they are run his circle of trust and can call him out on it. But at this point he is rushing his plans without proper preparation which should be wasteful in his own mind. Qrow is going along with it because he is thinking along the lines of the greater good, there should be no way that Qrow should be ok with sacrificing his niece (or daughter depending on which genealogical road you go down), especially since Ruby hasn't unlocked her Silver eyes power yet. Why would Jaune see Madra, wouldn't he have shisui uchiha eyes from the Qrow he swallowed back in the first chapter? not going to question it too much, but Jaune needs to do a lot in order to protect those he cares about. I love the Bleach abridged references used and as much as I would hope for more, I fear I am 6 years too late. :'( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are nora and ren your deadpools of this story good author |
![]() ![]() ![]() Randomly thought about this fic |
![]() ![]() What the fuck is this fucking piece of shit? Oh, that was just me with my brain turned on—don't mind him. Been turning it off quite a while to stomach this work. Anyway, have a good life, Bro. The way you write Jaune makes me think that you share the same trouble he has. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe you turned Jaune into a mini kakashi |
![]() ![]() yea holy fuck this chapter was bad. wtf was the point of that made up team from out of no where? Make sense it was dropped. |
![]() ![]() rofl that whole rant was absolute shit. god the whole attempt with jaunes 'personality' is just pathetically bad. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Is this fic dead because it’s one of the most amazing story I’ve ever read. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a colossal waste of time to read. Moat of the story is him trying to rebuild a shit robot that stopped being funny after the second time he came out and then the rest is him mimicking Sasuke and Kakashi with a dash of itachi. How the fuck is he acting like them when he doesn't even know them? This fic should have stopped after the 5th chapter because the rest is crap. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm really not sure wtf is happening to Jaune. A few months and suddenly he's a Kakashi/Avenger Sasuke/Itachi/Madara combination? Where the hell did this come from? He's taken a bunch of Kakashi's mannerisms despite not ever seeing Kakashi or going through anything similar to Kakashi. He's doing the head poke thing like Itachi does to Sasuke for some reason. He's also becoming self righteous and monologuing. How did his personality become this twisted shit amalgation of multiple people? You're telling me that his Sharingan is just changing his personality to those who have had Sharingan before? It's honestly not good. Like he's not even Jaune anymore, just an OC Naruto type character placed into the story. I like a lot of your stories, but this one is really going off the rails in terms of Jaune as a character. At least in the other fics, we could see how he might've become what he was personality wise in those fics. This one, he just becomes it suddenly. No explanation. Like almost immediately after meeting the robot he's replaced. I'll try to keep reading, but I'm not sure if I'll be able to stomach this sudden replaced older sounding self righteous emo Sharingan user personality amalgamation that's passing itself off as Jaune. He's even become super casual and flirting with Glynda and calling her by her first name. Like WTF? From sitting and talking with her at lunch sometimes? Like I said, off the rails. |