I gotta say, I would kill to have a short based on this created. This would be one of the funniest filler episodes ever.

:D this was brilliant! Thank you so much for writing it, I loved it.

Awesome fic! I loved the characterization and the jokes were perfect.

This is awesome! I haven't been as to find much great one piece fics but again this on is incredible and

Oh man I'm literally laughing out loud right now. Awesome job on the characterization! It's so hard to find good non-ship fics with smoker and/or tashigi. There were so many good bits in this fic but I think my favorite had to be smoker trying to interact with a small child

Loved it! XD
Great take of humor on Smoker and Tashigi! Totally enjoyed every part of it!

I wanted to re-read this marvelous piece of work and it, to my horror, wasn't on my favorites list! Luckily for me, I remembered Tashigi's wine-colored dress! This will never fail to be one of my favorite One Piece stories. The humor's on point, the characterization's on point, and it's just a fun, crazy ride. I adore Smoker's viewpoints (such as his thoughts on children pirates) and Tashigi's intimidating sword-cutting figure the most!

Well. I think this went well, do you?

He sees the cigar room and his eyes turn into sparkly stars.

Tashigi kept the smile plastered on her face, though she found her hand hovering over where her sword should have been.

That. That is why people are pirates. They get to keep the sword.

Damn it, now I want a Jeffrey and Miss Thursday side story.

cool

Kids are pirates it's such a Smoker thing to think
And it would also explain A LOT about one piece pirates!
I like Smokey when he's goid with kids :)
And I like your story
Dammit Tashigi, didn't you know about that kindbof potential danger? Weren't you the one who actually knew what happened there?

Liza

Too lazy to log In
But I'm having waaaa y too much fun with this idea!

This was a fanastic read. I love how you made all the characters develop, shatterring steretypes.
Thank you.