Reviews for Lizards in Minnesota
cklammer chapter 1 . 9/12/2009
A nice glimpse into clan history - it would be a good intro for "Hunted Tribes".
eviljedijackson chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
ZOMG! this was a real piece of work here. i really like this telling of a piec of battletch history, but how dos this tie in with NWO?
Panzerfaust 150 chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
Thunder chapter 1 . 12/2/2002
No Excape for you. It seems we have found another NWO story line. The Title alone makes you wonder what that pincher movement described in NWO was all about...
Kaneta chapter 1 . 12/1/2002
Wow...this captured me right from the beginning, Nice Guy! You describe the battling perfectly-even though I'm not really familiar with the world beyond seeing my brother play, I could *see* what you meant. Please put up the next chapter soon!


As for critique...hmmm. I'm not actually finding anything wrong with it! But maybe the first thing he yelled would have been "You're with me!" Rather than "You are with me!" unless he's very grammatical in situations of stress.

Keep writing!