Reviews for Absolute Corruption
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28
This story was seriously disappointing. Bella was especially disappointing.
TheEasternWind chapter 1 . 7/28
This doesn't feel like seduction. This feels like sexual assault.
EdwardsGuardianAngel chapter 1 . 7/28
That was interesting. Didn't expect it to end quite so abruptly but it is what it is.
LOLO 5-0 chapter 1 . 7/9
I loved mobward and your innocent but feisty Bella, and yeah Charlie deserved his comeuppance. Would love more.
Bevey99 chapter 1 . 7/9
Pretty good, but would have loved to see it continued. Thanks for writing.
Evelyne-raconte chapter 1 . 7/9
That was very intense ! I like the way she resists him in the beginning.
I enjoyed reading this OS. Thank you.
Godschildtweety chapter 1 . 2/24
Good work
beachblonde2244 chapter 1 . 12/8/2018
Very cute oneshot! I’d love to see a future take of them :)
sue1zide chapter 1 . 12/2/2018
She's young, naive and has stars in her eyes. I think she's use to her lifestyle and doesn't have to give it up now.
grandmachix chapter 1 . 11/18/2018
So, so, Chicago Mafia. Edward was raised in it. Likely, Charlie Swan was a part of the life. But Bella was kept innocent until Edward saw her. She will be the perfect Mafia Wife. She'll stay out of the business and teach Edward how to love. She will keep her precious mare. Great one-shot.
Judy
BridieM chapter 1 . 7/1/2018
Really enjoyable. Thanks
ellabelleellabelle chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
More?
Guest chapter 1 . 5/11/2018
Bella is a amazingly easy skank in this. This piece of shit took everything from her and killed her dad! And shes all fucking over him. When he was walking towards her in her house I was rolling my eyes as she said shit like...I was drowning...

What a goddamn joke
Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2018
Right off the bat there are some serious problems with this story. The shit Edward spouts at the beginning? what a huge pile of unbelievable shit. The richest...most powerful...most lethal...etc etc etc. I'm rolling my eyes. Tell me this, why would THE MOST POWERFUL MAN EVER need someone to give him immunity? If hes as powerful as you say he shouldn't NEED anyone to GIVE him anything would he?

You just went way to fucking far with all that crap. Its like those stories where bella is a vamp ...the most powerful vamp in the history of vamps...and aros had decided she will be the princess and ...who the fuck cares. Those stories are total fucking garbage.
Icewomen chapter 1 . 4/30/2018
I always like this story wished it wasn't a one shot cause seemed rushed and she gave in way to easy even if at least had one more chapter to draw it out would of been good don't get me wrong love it but wished she fought longer and he tried harder besides all the force
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